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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Elesha Eden wrote:
Hiya
port please..
question ...what direction/style if any do you think i should be aiming for?
Thanks
Elesha Eden
x

Port= solid like. (Is that an option?)
Question= I think you are doing quite fine already. Not sure i would suggest much of any new direction.

Jan 17 13 08:54 pm Link

Retoucher

Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Virginia Ann wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120626/20/4fea8139a992a_m.jpg

What should I delete and what should I try to get more of?

Photo= lust wet lust
Q= more shoots with more photographers so that you can eliminate all but the best shots from each photog and create a well rounded port.

Jan 17 13 08:59 pm Link

Retoucher

Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Meghan Devlin wrote:
Port, please!

What should I do to get away from the mediocre?

Port= meh with minor in lust.
Q= this is what you need more of to keep yourself out of the mediocre
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120508/02/4fa8e68ebaa5a_m.jpg
This pushed you into the lust category for me. Wow

Jan 17 13 09:04 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Paul Tirado Photography wrote:
Port.

Gotta pick one photo

Jan 17 13 09:05 pm Link

Retoucher

Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Maria Susanti wrote:
port please

Meh for now

Jan 17 13 09:06 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Alexander Long wrote:
'Port'

Might as well, haven't had a shoot in so long and need a portfolio update, might as well have an idea of what needs to go big_smile

Gotta pick one.

Not reviewing entire ports any longer in the interest of time.

Jan 17 13 09:08 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

IDiivil wrote:
Portfolio please smile

And my only question is: Does my portfolio showcase me as a model in posing, expressiveness, and overall quality?

Need to choose just one photo now
But the port is a lust as I peeked and to answer your question; I think so but I was mostly drooling.

Jan 17 13 09:10 pm Link

Retoucher

Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Jan Aeberhard wrote:
Im in

If your in then post a photo and ask a question. Otherwise you're out.

Jan 17 13 09:11 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

CamiAnn wrote:

LOL... really I'm 53...thank you so much for the lust, drooling and dyslexia! wink   what image would you edit and how? 

xo
CamiAnn

Ideally any image that features your amazing 50yr+ body. Legally any photo you have the rights to edit (or one your taken yourself) and want me to stare at for a it and push some pixels around.

Jan 17 13 09:15 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Jojo West wrote:
Oh oh me!

Q: I'm just starting out, what should I add to my port?

Answer= maybe a few really good retro pinup style shots. Find a good photo/editor combo be it the same person or two different people who will collaborate.

Jan 17 13 09:20 pm Link

Model

Sibby S

Posts: 178

Adelaide, South Australia, Australia

Port please smile

What is my port missing? (If your answer is high fashion, I've got some coming along!) smile

Jan 18 13 12:04 am Link

Photographer

EdwardKristopher

Posts: 3409

Tempe, Arizona, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111012/23/4e968b07f0a8c.jpg

Which 5 photos, in My Port, should I delete or get Edited?

Kindest regards,
Edward

Jan 18 13 12:26 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Sibby S wrote:
Port please smile

What is my port missing? (If your answer is high fashion, I've got some coming along!) smile

Port=. New rule.  You gotta pick one photo to play Meh Lust or Drool.

Question = i was going to say "more photos of you eating peal necklaces" but it sounds like you've got your question answered already.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121203/02/50bc850b5f92d_m.jpg

Jan 22 13 09:45 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

EdwardKristopher wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111012/23/4e968b07f0a8c.jpg

Which 5 photos, in My Port, should I delete or get Edited?

Kindest regards,
Edward

Photo: mostly lust except for the leg of the easel peeking out behind hers. Draws unwanted at attension.

Question: I would probably remove all the nearly identical shots. You have quite a few taken at nearly the same angle/pose. Also I wouldn't put a black and white version right next to the color version. Pick the better one and show it.

Jan 22 13 10:02 pm Link

Photographer

EdwardKristopher

Posts: 3409

Tempe, Arizona, US

Thanks so much for your time and advice!

Jan 22 13 10:06 pm Link

Model

Inertia Creeps

Posts: 102

Sunnyvale, California, US

Check out my portfolio. I'm curious.

Justine

Jan 22 13 10:14 pm Link

Model

_eMMe_

Posts: 866

Florence, Toscana, Italy

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30884007

This shot!

Question: choose three to delete

Jan 23 13 02:46 am Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Inertia Creeps wrote:
Check out my portfolio. I'm curious.

Justine

You have to pick one of your photos to play. Can't just say "port", although your question could be about your port as a whole if you'd like.

Jan 24 13 06:03 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

_eMMe_ wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30884007

This shot!

Question: choose three to delete

Photo: meh for me. It's not nearly as entising as most of the rest of your work.

Three to deleate:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121206/11/50c0f88d085af_m.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121206/11/50c0f80c81b22_m.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121208/13/50c3b2b5ed01c_m.jpg

Jan 24 13 06:07 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1748

Washington, District of Columbia, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/16/50f3545bd2dd3_m.jpg

Would you work with thy?

Jan 24 13 06:20 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Rachel Reilly wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/16/50f3545bd2dd3_m.jpg

Would you work with thy?

Photo: lust/drool

Question: in a heartbeat. Send me a photo and discription of what you'd like to see out of it. And you'll get a freebie!

Jan 24 13 06:26 pm Link

Model

Jane Smithly

Posts: 1097

Crowley, Texas, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg

Question: What is the meaning of life? ;P

Jan 24 13 06:29 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1748

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Heavenly Creatures 2 wrote:
Photo: lust/drool

Question: in a heartbeat. Send me a photo and discription of what you'd like to see out of it. And you'll get a freebie!

Exciting! I'll send a few and you can pick your favorite!

How shall I send?

Edit : or rather just send me a message when you're free!

Jan 24 13 06:31 pm Link

Photographer

juliarabkin

Posts: 782

Rochester, New York, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120920/15/505b93c908321.jpg

overall take on my portfolio? (the new stuff is at the top and on the profile page)

Jan 24 13 06:34 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg

Question: What is the meaning of life? ;P

P: certainly lust.
Q: the condition that distinguishes organisms from inorganic objects and dead organisms, being manifested by growth through metabolism, reproduction wink and the power of adaptation to environment through changes originating internally.

Jan 24 13 10:02 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

JuliaRabkindotcom wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120920/15/505b93c908321.jpg

overall take on my portfolio? (the new stuff is at the top and on the profile page)

P: drool
Q: I absolutely love your work! The new b/w images are quite striking and beautiful.

Jan 24 13 10:18 pm Link

Model

julia00

Posts: 57

Rochester, New York, US

Heavenly Creatures 2 wrote:

P: drool
Q: I absolutely love your work! The new b/w images are quite striking and beautiful.

thank you

Jan 25 13 12:52 pm Link

Model

julia00

Posts: 57

Rochester, New York, US

oops! wrong account, but still, thank you anyway!

Jan 25 13 12:52 pm Link

Photographer

thirdfoots

Posts: 109

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130103/02/50e55e2d87d2d_m.jpg

Q:What would you change in my folio and why.

thanks

j

Jan 26 13 02:07 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

thirdfoots wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130103/02/50e55e2d87d2d_m.jpg

Q:What would you change in my folio and why.

thanks

j

P: probably lust on its own but meh compared to you other work.
Q: I would lose the single photo. I'm digging the other grouped photos as a whole body of work. The single image (while useful for your icon) does little to support the rest of your port.

Jan 29 13 09:34 pm Link

Model

Maruschke

Posts: 543

Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130109/17/50ee1dd51c078_m.jpg
 

Q: Is there any genre that you think I should try and that you think I would be good at?

Jan 30 13 05:30 pm Link

Photographer

MidnightSun Designs

Posts: 363

WINSTON SALEM, North Carolina, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130127/09/510567044fcae_m.jpg

Jan 31 13 02:50 pm Link

Model

Kelly Ann Carter

Posts: 93

Hollywood, Florida, US

My avatar

Jan 31 13 06:47 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Maruschke wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130109/17/50ee1dd51c078_m.jpg
 

Q: Is there any genre that you think I should try and that you think I would be good at?

P: meh compaired to your other work
Q: bodyscapes

Feb 16 13 10:34 am Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

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Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

MidnightSun Designs wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130127/09/510567044fcae_m.jpg

Why sure, lust

Feb 16 13 10:36 am Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Kelly Ann Carter wrote:
My avatar

Certainly a lusty image!

Feb 16 13 10:37 am Link

Photographer

Dontez Akins

Posts: 345

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Feb 16 13 12:48 pm Link

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Heavenly Creatures 2

Posts: 562

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Dontez Akins wrote:
I go with this image

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29894994

Photo: on the lusty side.

Feb 22 13 05:21 pm Link