Thatcher Photography wrote:
Best - Great comp and model. Nice style work too!


Worst - Try to keep the feet in the shot so you show the whole look on full body shots. The model needed to keep her left are up on the knee or leg to help show off her figure with a bit of a window in her pose. There is also to much open space above your model. I would either crop it or frame shots like this with your model higher in the frame. I would also brighten this shot up to show her off better.


Worst 2 - Not your fault!! Great camera work and location! The model chose a pose that makes her look like she lost her legs in an accident.

Meghan Devlin wrote:
Your images are wonderful!



This one isn't quite on par with the rest, although that's only my opinion.

Best - Even though the comp is not perfect, I think this shot shows you the best. A tighter crop on you would make this perfect! Perhaps a touch more mood too.


Worst - If your right arm was not as bunch this one would be much better. Very sexy style, MU, and hair!


Try to change up your mood enough to make many of the shots in your port vastly different. I do like the few that you are showing!

ThomasChad wrote:
Yes! Let me know

Best - Great figure shot! Perfect light and comp for this too! Nice styling of the hair too.


Best 2 - Just a well done work of art all the way around.


Worst - Color balance is not doing anything for you. A touch of confidence in this mood would help it feel more real.

Gamma Photography wrote:
I'm always keen to know what I'm doing wrong: Let 'er rip

Best - Run with more ideas like this! Make it your specialty! Love it!


Worst - The skin work in PP jumps out at me and the comp is not as strong as your other work.

Aftannoon wrote:
Go for it!

Best - Great pose! Sexy style!! Wish the comp was stronger... not your fault.


Worst - I don't think it does anything for your port. The other one from this set is much better.

kayla-lynn wrote:
take a look!

Best - The only fix would be your left hand needs to be more slim to the camera to try to match the width of your right hand. What makes this photo great is your eyes, the sheer top, your character filled shorts, and your nice hair.


Worst - I feel like this top does not do you justice. You have a very sexy figure. Make sure you combine it with wardrobe that will make everyone say dayum!

Madeline Model wrote:
I'd love to know! And know the reasoning?

Best - OMFG!! This one is off the charts! Call the MM police, this is pushed over the limits of MM sexy, and you did that all with your eyes! I wish I had you here so we could nail some shots like this for my headshot collection. The only thing I would change is a tighter crop to make it more about you. Nice bra too BTW. Ha!!


Worst - Comp is cutting out to many of the details. Your others from this shoot are stronger.

BethanyKay wrote:
I can't remember if you've told me or not?

Best - Great style! Sexy pose!


Worst - Pose combined with the shadow bulk you up and don't do you justice.

Diana Mathew wrote:
Why not..I'll give this a go. Let me know

Best - Love it! Do more of this!!


Worst - Does not help you. Trash in BG and bad color work in PP.

Dwayne Adams wrote:
Keen to know.

Best - Great style and model!! Love the DOF too. I would fill the frame a tad more with her.


Worst - I like the theme... The splotchy light made this my least fav.

ResaVictoria wrote:
curious

Best - I think this one shows you off the best. Nice style and mood!! Try to line up a few good pro photographers. The date on the lower right part of the photo is distracting.


Worst - I don't like the light spill on this one. The lines create an optical illusion that makes you look like you are missing a few of your teeth.

LexAn wrote:
I don't think I've participated... i'd like to know!

Best - Great viewpoint! Nice shot!! The light splotching is the only thing that bugs me. Still a great shot!


Best 2 - This would be your number one if there was not so much hair in her face. Love the style!!! Super sexy modeling!



Worst - To much hair in your face. To much lower teeth. Cool post work and comp!

Daniel Pierce wrote:
Best:



Great halo from the sun, and magnetic pose, and energy from the model.



Worst:

Could be great for some, but for me the pose is too posed, and it just isn't getting a story or anything alluring across (not slanted towards to model at all. She's great.)

Best - Awesome headshot! Perfect Comp and camera work too!! Great hair!


Worst - I don't feel that this one helps your port any.

Shirin McBennett-Sheen wrote:
You´re still doing it?

Best - Great shot!!! Love the style and they are awesome together!


Worst - Least fav.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33575061 18+

Glitter Kitten wrote:
Hey, I'd like to know what you think my best and worst shots are. Any feedback is welcomed.

Best - AWESOME! Do more like this!


Worst - Pose does not match the styling.

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best - Great viewpoint! Nice shot and model!! The light splotching is the only thing that bugs me. Still a great shot!


Best 2 - This would be your number one if there was not so much hair in her face. Love the style!!! Super sexy model!



Worst - To much hair in the models face. To much lower teeth from the model. Cool post work and comp!

LexAn wrote:
I'm the model not the photog! haha

Yeah... I just noticed that and went through and edited the comments. Ha!! I am sleepy, but trying to catch up on here. HA!!

Marlene Potfer wrote:
If you're still going... would love to hear your thoughts!

Best - Cool shot... great figure... I wish the edit work on your nipples was not so obvious.


Worst - I don't think this one helps your port out. The others from this set are stronger.

mPm Studios wrote:
Let me play!

Best - Super cute!!! Great tones!


Worst - Better for Flickr... not a good match for MM.

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best - Cool shot... great figure... I wish the edit work on your nipples was not so obvious.


Worst - I don't think this one helps your port out. The others from this set are stronger.

Thank you for your feedback!

AaronPawlak wrote:
what do you think?

and "why?" on the worst shot....

Thatcher Photography wrote:
Best - Run with more ideas like this! Make it your specialty! Love it!

Thatcher Photography wrote:
Worst - The skin work in PP jumps out at me

Thanks for the detailed critique on my worst: It helps to know what I did wrong. I took it out of my port and might go back to the original some day to see if I can do better post on it.... or maybe not

Thanks again, Brother,

Cheers!

Gary

AaronPawlak wrote:

and "why?" on the worst shot....

Best - Love the glam factor on this!! Nice job and sexy model!!!


Worst - Just my least fav. If her body stood out a bit more from her surroundings, then it would help it out. Sexy figure!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16808725

Gamma Photography wrote:

Thatcher Photography wrote:
Best - Run with more ideas like this! Make it your specialty! Love it!

Thanks for the detailed critique on my worst: It helps to know what I did wrong. I took it out of my port and might go back to the original some day to see if I can do better post on it.... or maybe not

Thanks again, Brother,

Cheers!

Gary

Not a problem!! Glad I could help!!

Dave McDermott wrote:
I'd love to know.

Best - Great color and model!! Love the comp and camera work too. Move this one up!! - perhaps an AVI!


Worst - Too much forehead on this one for me. Sexy eyes and lips!