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Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Digitoxin wrote:

Ask you anything?

Who is my favorite Divadork?

Moi? Say me. Doooo it. Pwease?

Apr 18 13 07:36 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Callen Photography

Posts: 260

Buffalo, New York, US

Which image is my best in my standard album, and my members only album?  Thanks!

Apr 18 13 07:37 pm Link

Photographer

DougBPhoto

Posts: 39248

Portland, Oregon, US

B R E N N A N wrote:
Ask me anything. Warning: I'm not always nice and you may not like what I have to say.

Reopen. I don't want to do homework. Help me procrastinate.

Have I ever mentioned how much I love your mind.  tongue

Apr 18 13 07:40 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Mark Callen Photography wrote:
Which image is my best in my standard album, and my members only album?  Thanks!

Members only: The two of what appears to be Adrina, though she's not credited.
Standard: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32102936
or https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 8#32347386

Apr 18 13 07:41 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

DougBPhoto wrote:
Have I ever mentioned how much I love your mind.  tongue

This is a little stalkerish, dontcha think? *snicker*

Apr 18 13 07:41 pm Link

Photographer

DougBPhoto

Posts: 39248

Portland, Oregon, US

B R E N N A N wrote:

This is a little stalkerish, dontcha think? *snicker*

WHAT!!!  yikes

Apr 18 13 07:50 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

DougBPhoto wrote:

WHAT!!!  yikes

Sorry, I thought models were supposed to misinterpret nice things said to them in the forums as stalkerish. My bad.

Apr 18 13 07:51 pm Link

Photographer

DougBPhoto

Posts: 39248

Portland, Oregon, US

B R E N N A N wrote:

Sorry, I thought models were supposed to misinterpret nice things said to them in the forums as stalkerish. My bad.

You're forgiven.

I was afraid I was going to have to take down more pictures off my shrine wall

Apr 18 13 07:56 pm Link

Photographer

MLRPhoto

Posts: 5766

Olivet, Michigan, US

DougBPhoto wrote:
WHAT!!!  yikes

B R E N N A N wrote:
Sorry, I thought models were supposed to misinterpret nice things said to them in the forums as stalkerish. My bad.

BWAAAAHAAAHAAA!


What should I get rid of?  I need to get some more recent work up, but I get attached to things, and it's hard to be objective.  Without actually thinking about WHICH pictures, I figure 4-10 of the current 24 should go, so I can bring in some newer work, and have space for things I do in the future.

Apr 18 13 07:56 pm Link

Photographer

Ed Woodson Photography

Posts: 2644

Savannah, Georgia, US

B R E N N A N wrote:

It hasn't improved since then, I'm sure. lol

I sure you're probably correct.

Apr 18 13 08:01 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

MLRPhoto wrote:

DougBPhoto wrote:
WHAT!!!  yikes

BWAAAAHAAAHAAA!


What should I get rid of?  I need to get some more recent work up, but I get attached to things, and it's hard to be objective.  Without actually thinking about WHICH pictures, I figure 4-10 of the current 24 should go, so I can bring in some newer work, and have space for things I do in the future.

Ah, yeah, I suck at that too and should prolly do the same thing.

Ha, I totally didn't realize who you were til I clicked on your portfolio!!!!

What you need to delete depends on what your new stuff is and what direction you're trying to go.

Sorry, I realize that ^^^ is no help and uber ambiguous.

Apr 18 13 08:03 pm Link

Photographer

- HokusFokus -

Posts: 242

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

I can't believe I am getting sucked into this, especially since I never read the critique forum, but which of my pictures do you like most (if any) and which do you hate the most?

Apr 18 13 08:04 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

- BP Photo - wrote:
I can't believe I am getting sucked into this, especially since I never read the critique forum, but which of my pictures do you like most (if any) and which do you hate the most?

Why, whyyyyy are people that I like and enjoy working with the only people posting here?!?!?! lol
And duh, of course I like the one of me the most. tongue

Apr 18 13 08:07 pm Link

Photographer

- HokusFokus -

Posts: 242

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

B R E N N A N wrote:
And duh, of course I like the one of me the most. tongue

That is why it is still there.

Apr 18 13 08:11 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

- BP Photo - wrote:

That is why it is still there.

wink

Apr 18 13 08:17 pm Link

Model

Mary Zdo

Posts: 176

San Ramon, California, US

What's your favorite mythical being?

Are we only allowed one question? Because I'm about to ask three. What can I do to improve as a model/become as awesome as you one day? big_smile

Apr 18 13 08:19 pm Link

Photographer

MLRPhoto

Posts: 5766

Olivet, Michigan, US

B R E N N A N wrote:
What you need to delete depends on what your new stuff is and what direction you're trying to go.

Sorry, I realize that ^^^ is no help and uber ambiguous.

What I SHOULD focus on is art nudes and portraits.  I don't have the money, or the location, to be a fashion photographer.

I'll try phrasing it this way; is any of it notably worse than the rest, or redundant, or otherwise screaming "get rid of me"???

Apr 18 13 08:19 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Mary Zdo wrote:
What's your favorite mythical being?

A unicorn.. Because it's a fucking unicorn.

Are we only allowed one question? Because I'm about to ask three. What can I do to improve as a model

Quit wasting your time doing editorial stuff and focus on commercial work.

become as awesome as you one day? big_smile

Be mean and snarky to people on the internet?

Apr 18 13 08:24 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

MLRPhoto wrote:

What I SHOULD focus on is art nudes and portraits.  I don't have the money, or the location, to be a fashion photographer.

I'll try phrasing it this way; is any of it notably worse than the rest, or redundant, or otherwise screaming "get rid of me"???

Then focus on that.

Ugh, don't hate me, but I hate this image of M.B.:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19683284 (18+). The lighting is porn flat, the expressions don't fit the poses, and it's boring. Sowwy. sad

Apr 18 13 08:28 pm Link

Model

Phane

Posts: 2063

Rockville, Maryland, US

What kind of modeling should I focus on?
Fav movie?

Apr 18 13 08:34 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Phane wrote:
What kind of modeling should I focus on?
Fav movie?

Yay, you're back at it!!!!! big_smile

Art. You're built for it, are so expressive, and in a great location for it too. I'd like to see you do some fun, pin-up stuff too, though.

Oh, fav movie. I'm a sucker for any awful, B horror movie.

Apr 18 13 08:37 pm Link

Photographer

DougBPhoto

Posts: 39248

Portland, Oregon, US

B R E N N A N wrote:
Be mean and snarky to people on the internet?

Wait, I thought that was only what washed up former llamas do.


Where can I learn all these rules of proper forum conduct ??

Apr 18 13 08:39 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

DougBPhoto wrote:

Wait, I thought that was only what washed up former models do.


Where can I learn all these rules of proper forum conduct ??

lol *dies*

Apr 18 13 08:43 pm Link

Photographer

Fotografica Gregor

Posts: 4126

Alexandria, Virginia, US

how about a general opinion or critique of my work - or whatever you feel like, that aids you in your procrastination smile

Apr 18 13 08:47 pm Link

Model

Phane

Posts: 2063

Rockville, Maryland, US

B R E N N A N wrote:

Yay, you're back at it!!!!! big_smile

Art. You're built for it, are so expressive, and in a great location for it too. I'd like to see you do some fun, pin-up stuff too, though.

Oh, fav movie. I'm a sucker for any awful, B horror movie.

Thanks Love wink you always make me smile

Apr 18 13 09:03 pm Link

Model

Phane

Posts: 2063

Rockville, Maryland, US

B R E N N A N wrote:

Yay, you're back at it!!!!! big_smile

Art. You're built for it, are so expressive, and in a great location for it too. I'd like to see you do some fun, pin-up stuff too, though.

Oh, fav movie. I'm a sucker for any awful, B horror movie.

Thanks Love wink you always make me smile

Apr 18 13 09:03 pm Link

Photographer

RBM Photo

Posts: 557

Bellbrook, Ohio, US

Why aren't you doing your homework?

Apr 18 13 09:09 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Fotografica Gregor wrote:
how about a general opinion or critique of my work - or whatever you feel like, that aids you in your procrastination smile

We already played this game in this thread, but I DO like the new stuffs you have posted!!!

Apr 18 13 09:09 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

RBM Photo wrote:
Why aren't you doing your homework?

hienvy hienvy hienvy
Because I've had a shitty day, can't focus, and choose to take my frustrations out on random people on the internet. lol

Apr 18 13 09:11 pm Link

Photographer

DougBPhoto

Posts: 39248

Portland, Oregon, US

B R E N N A N wrote:
lol *dies*

NO!!!!  You can't do THAT !!!




your OP says to ask you anything....

I want to know, damn it !!!


FINE...   nevermind...

new question....   

nevermind, I don't want to make you hungry.....

.....

What is your favorite beer and favorite wine ?

Apr 18 13 09:13 pm Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

DougBPhoto wrote:

NO!!!!  You can't do THAT !!!




your OP says to ask you anything....

I want to know, damn it !!!


FINE...   nevermind...

new question....   

nevermind, I don't want to make you hungry.....

.....

What is your favorite beer and favorite wine ?

Free? Nothing beats quality like price!!!!!
Though I am quite partial to creamy porters, and Willamette Valley pinot noirs.

Apr 18 13 09:21 pm Link

Photographer

Dan K Photography

Posts: 5581

STATEN ISLAND, New York, US

Ever dance with the devil in the pale moonlight?

and what do you think of

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32363849

Apr 18 13 09:36 pm Link

Photographer

RBM Photo

Posts: 557

Bellbrook, Ohio, US

B R E N N A N wrote:
Because I've had a shitty day, can't focus, and choose to take my frustrations out on random people on the internet. lol

pfffttt, that's like half the people here in these forums on any given day  :p

Apr 18 13 09:38 pm Link

Model

Shelly Foster

Posts: 53

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada

K first off your hilarious, just to get that out of the way.

If you had the choice to time travel and change today would you?

Annnnnd how can I improve as a mode// should I get rid of any of my pictures

All done. smile

Apr 18 13 10:38 pm Link

Photographer

dayplace

Posts: 44

Hacienda Heights, California, US

Apr 18 13 11:16 pm Link

Model

Sharkie Mac

Posts: 133

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Haha love your bluntness and need your help so I'll risk it and ask a few questions if you don't mind!

Newish and trying to get more great photographers, know I need to cull my shots - what's the dead weight & needs to go?
Also, what do you see as a good avenue in modeling for me, and do you see anything special in my look at all to try to get any more professional work as a plus size model?

Cheers smile

Apr 19 13 02:49 am Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Shelly Foster wrote:
K first off your hilarious, just to get that out of the way.

You're very purdy. bunny And you're one of the few 17 year olds on this site with a professional, articulate bio.

If you had the choice to time travel and change today would you?

No, but if I had answered this yesterday I sure as shit would have answered yes.

Annnnnd how can I improve as a mode// should I get rid of any of my pictures

All done. smile

Fix your stats.
More of this:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30705812
Less of this:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31701022
You're young, have a solid commercial look and stats, so focus more on that.

Apr 19 13 06:31 am Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Dan K Photography wrote:
Ever dance with the devil in the pale moonlight?

and what do you think of

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32363849

Only after drinking. I'm not a good dancer.

Generally, I like it. There are a few things about it that bother me, like the framing and the fact that it looks like she's smelling her armpit.

Apr 19 13 06:36 am Link

Model

B R E N N A N

Posts: 4247

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Sharkie Mac wrote:
Haha love your bluntness and need your help so I'll risk it and ask a few questions if you don't mind!

Newish and trying to get more great photographers, know I need to cull my shots - what's the dead weight & needs to go?
Also, what do you see as a good avenue in modeling for me, and do you see anything special in my look at all to try to get any more professional work as a plus size model?

Cheers smile

I got bored about halfway through your portfolio. Your portfolio needs to be culled down by about half. Keep:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26141518
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27638547
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31299704
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31299595
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31283039 (even though the PSd nipple really scares me)
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29295051 (same on the lack of nip)

If you want to get work, you need to have stats up. You have a good glam and pinup look though, so if I were you I would ditch the gore and bondage stuff and stick with that.

Apr 19 13 06:49 am Link

Photographer

Solas

Posts: 10390

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

What was the best date you've ever been on ? What did you do ?
What was the worst ?

(im bored too) (procrastinating studying)

Apr 19 13 06:51 am Link