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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Mary Zdo wrote:
I'm curious.

You are tall and thin with a pretty face and a good shape.  Your profile is very complete and forthcoming.  Your portfolio has some nice shots in it that show you off very well.

Not many people have seen or commented on your pictures.  I would get on the main menu of MM and ask to trade comments with people there to get yourself more noticed.

You look great.  You should do well but you are going to have to work to get noticed.

Mar 12 13 07:04 am  Link  Quote 
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Destiny Noir
Posts: 38
Clarksville, Tennessee, US


Me smile
Mar 12 13 07:08 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Tiffiney C wrote:
I'll play.

Tiff
www.TiffineyC.com

You are pretty and certainly have the right figure.  Your portfolio has some really nice shots of you.  You are obviously well experienced. I would hire you.

I looked at one of your videos.  It didn't work for me.  Then it kicked me back to Google.  Now I wouldn't hire you because your video irritated me. But that is just me.

You are doing well and I ecpect that you will continue to do so.

Mar 12 13 07:11 am  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Jessy Claire wrote:
Ok... smile

You have a face that really appeals to me.  Can't quite put a adjective to it so let's just call it that clean girl-next-door  look.

Your port has some good shots of you in a variety of settings.  Your profile is short and to the point.  I found the entire package interesting and would love to shoot. you.

Good luck.

Mar 12 13 07:15 am  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


SophiaRed wrote:
Im curious

Well the first line in your port says you are taking a break.  Good.  But why should I bother if you taking a break.  I am not sure why you or anyone puts that in their profile. I suggest you either get in the game or go take a break

Then you go on to say how busy you are with other work. Once again I am exhausted knowing you are working so hard.  I would want someone who is more readily available and interested in modeling.

Sorry but I would pass.

Mar 12 13 07:19 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Destiny Noir wrote:
Me smile

You are pretty and tall and have an interesting if maybe not exotic face.  Your portfolio is complete with a lot of good shots of you in it.  All in all it is all good.  But there is nothing that jumps off of the screen and says hire me either.

I don't know what it is but there needs to be a shot that just grabs me and I don't see it in there.  I would have to give that more thought.

But good luck and I hope you do very well.

Mar 12 13 07:24 am  Link  Quote 
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Mary Zdo
Posts: 176
San Ramon, California, US


bob  n wrote:
You are tall and thin with a pretty face and a good shape.  Your profile is very complete and forthcoming.  Your portfolio has some nice shots in it that show you off very well.

Not many people have seen or commented on your pictures.  I would get on the main menu of MM and ask to trade comments with people there to get yourself more noticed.

You look great.  You should do well but you are going to have to work to get noticed.

Thank you for the feedback and the advice! Oh man, I guess it's time for me to stop being so lazy and actually demand that people notice me. Good idea.

Mar 12 13 12:13 pm  Link  Quote 
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SophiaRed
Posts: 43
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US


bob  n wrote:
Well the first line in your port says you are taking a break.  Good.  But why should I bother if you taking a break.  I am not sure why you or anyone puts that in their profile. I suggest you either get in the game or go take a break

Then you go on to say how busy you are with other work. Once again I am exhausted knowing you are working so hard.  I would want someone who is more readily available and interested in modeling.

Sorry but I would pass.

I guess i should explain.
I was in a car wreck, thats why I was taking the break. I was injured and lost my car. I am just now getting back to it, and forgot to take it off the page. I guess I only put it up there as a heads up before anyone thought I may be ignoring them. , because I hadn't been booking or really checking my email during that period.


As far as the rest, You were right about how it appeared. I fixed it. If you think its more appropriate let me know. I don't have as hectic of a schedule anymore anyways smile I'd like to hear what you think would be best for it smile Thank you! I appreciate the feedback!

Mar 12 13 06:48 pm  Link  Quote 
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Anastacia Swann
Posts: 30
Quincy, Illinois, US


I'll bite! wink
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Janessa Pablo
Posts: 10
Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines


Ready! smile
Mar 12 13 07:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Anastacia Swann wrote:
I'll bite! wink

You have a great figure.  Very slender.  Great face too.

Your profile is complete and forthcoming.  Your portfolio has some really good shots of you that show you off very well.  You seem very relaxed both in and out of your clothes.

I would hire you in a heart beat.  You have a very young look that goes with the slender figure.

Mar 12 13 07:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Janessa Pablo wrote:
Ready! smile

You are so young. And being Oriental you look even younger.  Not that there is anything wrong with that.

Your port needs some more professional shots in it.  What you have looks like shots taken by a friend. I wish I were close enough to help you out with that.  But look around and someone in your area may be able to give you a hand with that.

Your profile is a bit thin, but adequate.

I would not shoot you because you are so young.  But that does not mean that others won't.  Good luck and be careful out there.

Mar 12 13 08:01 pm  Link  Quote 
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Anastacia Swann
Posts: 30
Quincy, Illinois, US


bob  n wrote:

You have a great figure.  Very slender.  Great face too.

Your profile is complete and forthcoming.  Your portfolio has some really good shots of you that show you off very well.  You seem very relaxed both in and out of your clothes.

I would hire you in a heart beat.  You have a very young look that goes with the slender figure.

Thank you very much for your input! I'm always looking for good criticism to better myself as a model. I've only shot 4 times professionally, so I know I have a long way to go. Hearing that you would hire me in a heart beat has really given me a boost of confidence! Thank you SO much! big_smile

XoXo
A Swann

Mar 12 13 09:22 pm  Link  Quote 
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Miaa Rigby
Posts: 360
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US


mee.
Mar 23 13 04:09 pm  Link  Quote 
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Elaine Ford
Posts: 2,045
Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom


go smile
Mar 23 13 04:27 pm  Link  Quote 
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Cheyenne Varker
Posts: 4
Victoria, Virginia, US


Ready smile
Mar 23 13 04:34 pm  Link  Quote 
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Cheyenne Varker
Posts: 4
Victoria, Virginia, US


Im all ears smile
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Cheyenne Varker
Posts: 4
Victoria, Virginia, US


Im all ears smile
Mar 23 13 05:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Miaa Rigby wrote:
mee.

You have a very complete profile which is very good.  You lay out what your requirements are and you gotta respect that.

You have chosen a sector of llamaing that obviously appeals to you.  It does not appeal to me.  You are very pretty and with your slender figure you go do a lot of gendres but you chose to go down one path. That's cool.  I would think a llama would want to be everything to everybody and then you could get a lot more paid work.

So I would not hire you.  But good luck in being an alternate lifestyle llama. I am sure there are a lot of photogs out there looking for just that.

Mar 23 13 05:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Cheyenne Varker wrote:
Im all ears smile

Well you are not all ears.  You are a very pretty girl as near as I can tell.

Your profile is short.  Nothing wrong with that.

Your port pretty much has the same shot over and over.  Give the public what they want: portrait of that pretty face, little black dress, jeans, casual clothes, bathing suit and whatever else you are comfortable with.

Get a local photographer to shoot you TF and upgrade your portfolio.  Then get some exposure by trading comment for comment. Zike everything else in this world the more effort you put in, the more result you will get.

And stay safe out there.

Mar 23 13 05:47 pm  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Elaine Ford wrote:
go smile

Yowser!  You are a beauty.  Truly stunning.  Hire you?  Hell I would give you a kidney.

Your profile is good.  It list a lot of links. I am not a fan of links.  It also lists your music accomplishments.  I am not interested.  This is a modeling site.  Keep to the point. I am sure there are sites where your other talents could be displayed..

Your portfolio does a good job of showing you off to perfection.  You can always do more of course and you should keep you port fresh. 

I don't see any reason not to hire you.  Heck I would buy you a house.

Good luck.

Mar 23 13 05:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jhomel
Posts: 180
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


Me smile
Mar 25 13 04:12 pm  Link  Quote 
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Licorne
Posts: 12
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


you seem to give good comments! I have only done one photoshoot (so all the photos of my port are from that same day) but I would love to hear what you have to say! Keep in mind that it is a starting point for me, though
Mar 25 13 05:17 pm  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Licorne wrote:
you seem to give good comments! I have only done one photoshoot (so all the photos of my port are from that same day) but I would love to hear what you have to say! Keep in mind that it is a starting point for me, though

Well you are quite beautiful with a really great face especially the eyes.

Your port, since you are just starting, does not have a lot of variety, but you need to get some.  Have someone shoot you TF in whatever you are comfortable with: Little black dress, bathing suit, lingerie, jeans etc. Once you get the shot you need never shoot for free again unless there is some serious upside to doing so.

Then promote yourself by doing comment trades.

And stay in school.  I doubt that many people make a living modeling but there is always a need for good engineers. 

And more importantly, stay safe.

Mar 25 13 06:15 pm  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Jhomel wrote:
Me smile

Well  you are a good looking guy with a good physic.  But I never shoot male models and I do not know what is expected by people who do.  I could suggest more variety in your port but in almost every case that is needed.

Sorry I don't have more constructive input to make.

Mar 25 13 06:17 pm  Link  Quote 
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Licorne
Posts: 12
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


Thanks for the tips, and photo comment! I am booking shoots very soon, and will get some variety going smile
(also, this will stay a hobby, engineering is the priority)
Mar 25 13 06:34 pm  Link  Quote 
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Ashayla Webster
Posts: 520
Perth, Western Australia, Australia


Would you pay me?
Mar 28 13 06:43 pm  Link  Quote 
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MariaPantellis
Posts: 60
Derby, England, United Kingdom


Me please smile
Mar 29 13 05:09 pm  Link  Quote 
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Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,958
Portland, Oregon, US


seems fair
Mar 29 13 05:36 pm  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Ashayla Webster wrote:
Would you pay me?

Well I am not sure.  You have a good profile but you seem intent on promoting your sister and your boyfriend. I am not sure how to take that. Sweet of you to want to do that but I am not sure how it advances your cause..

You have a lot of diversity in your portfolio.  You are obviously pretty enough.  But there is no one picture that captures my attention. Yet I am not sure what is missing.

I am afraid I am not being of much help.  I guess I would pass just because there is no one thing that grabs my attention.

Please accept this in the spirit in which it is given.

Mar 29 13 07:16 pm  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


MariaPantellis wrote:
Me please smile

Well  you have a great body with  a killer rack.  Your portfolio shows you off well.

Your profile has a lot of links to other sites.  I am not a big fan of this.  What am I going to learn at those other sites that couldn't be posted on MM?  And you have a lot of requirements that you ask for when requesting a shoot.  I would pass just because I don't want to fill out an application that then allows me to ask a model if I can pay her to model. Are you so inundated with shoot requests that this is necessary? If so, raise your rates.

Good luck.

Mar 29 13 07:23 pm  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Cole Morrison wrote:
seems fair

You have a great slender figure.  Your profile is brief which is good.

Your portfolio shows you off in a light that I will call 'interesting' for lack of a better word.  You are pretty and have a great figure but you chose to pose it a certain style that I have to wonder about.  It is a style that I can't put a name to.  I am sure it will appeal to someone but not to me. 

It is a shame because I think that you have a lot to offer.  Why don't you?

Mar 29 13 07:29 pm  Link  Quote 
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Aimee LaSourire
Posts: 41
Heilbronn, Baden-W├╝rttemberg, Germany


Yes please you generous
Mar 29 13 07:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Aimee LaSourire wrote:
Yes please you generous

I would pay you to model.  You have a great figure and a great face.  Your profile is complete indicating what you want to accomplish and  your need for compensation.

Your portfolio has some great shots in it.  If there is anything missing it is a good portrait shot.  The closest you have to that is more of a snapshot taken outside.  You can do better here.

Also some shots in jeans, bikini and lingerie would be nice if you want to show that you are interested in those areas of shooting.

I think you will do well as you have a fresh wholesome look that I find appealing.

Mar 30 13 07:00 am  Link  Quote 
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Lynn Elizabeth
Posts: 1,336
Coral Springs, Florida, US


love to play!!
Mar 30 13 07:03 am  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Lynn Elizabeth wrote:
love to play!!

Your profile is complete.  A bit lengthy for my taste. Having a comment about who you won't work for is probably not a good idea.  Just don't answer the phone when they call.

Your portfolio is excellent.  You have many diverse looks in it.  In some it is hard to believe that they are of the same llama which is good.  You have a lot of good outfits and some nudes that are very tasteful.

Yeah I would pay you to llama.  You seem to have it all together.  I probably should be asking for your advice.  Good luck.

Mar 30 13 12:43 pm  Link  Quote 
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Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,958
Portland, Oregon, US


bob  n wrote:

You have a great slender figure.  Your profile is brief which is good.

Your portfolio shows you off in a light that I will call 'interesting' for lack of a better word.  You are pretty and have a great figure but you chose to pose it a certain style that I have to wonder about.  It is a style that I can't put a name to.  I am sure it will appeal to someone but not to me. 

It is a shame because I think that you have a lot to offer.  Why don't you?

It is appealing to some! I am willing to shoot most genres, but I am not typical sexy and dont do lingerie or boudoir too well, I have tried them in the past and would shoot them again but probably only for pay because I wouldnt want to use the photos for my portfolio.

Apr 11 13 09:47 pm  Link  Quote 
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Scoria
Posts: 55
Coquitlam, British Columbia, Canada


Yes please! smile
Apr 12 13 11:31 am  Link  Quote 
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bob n
Posts: 131
Manteca, California, US


Scoria wrote:
Yes please! smile

You have a pretty face and a great figure.  You have chosen to go down the path of body modification and you claim it is what you are interested in.  I am sure there is a growing demand for someone with body art so  you should do well.

Your Profile is complete but maybe a little too much about all of the reasons you can't shoot.  Maybe tone it down there a bit.  You can always say 'no' to any offer that does not fit your schedule.

I would pay to shoot you as you have more body art then I care for.   But I think you will get lots of offers from others as you have everything else you should need.

Apr 12 13 12:52 pm  Link  Quote 
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Scoria
Posts: 55
Coquitlam, British Columbia, Canada


bob  n wrote:
You have a pretty face and a great figure.  You have chosen to go down the path of body modification and you claim it is what you are interested in.  I am sure there is a growing demand for someone with body art so  you should do well.

Your Profile is complete but maybe a little too much about all of the reasons you can't shoot.  Maybe tone it down there a bit.  You can always say 'no' to any offer that does not fit your schedule.

I would pay to shoot you as you have more body art then I care for.   But I think you will get lots of offers from others as you have everything else you should need.

Awesome, thanks for the input! smile

Apr 12 13 12:56 pm  Link  Quote 
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