gpmcguire wrote:
I dare you to find it. 








I might regret that in the morning.

Very nice work, no need for regrets. But...what's with that furry thing at the end? That doesn't belong on a port.

This may be your best:
18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30424872

Laurel Lee wrote:
try me

You seriously have to work on your posing.
You call yourself a beginner and yet have an extensive number of pics in your port. Sort out and go for the highest quality.

This is your best:
18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29761925

Tia Harris wrote:
Im a newbie so would really appreciate the feedback. stunning portfolio by the way

Thanks.
There are some pictures that are quiet ok / good for a beginner, but also someyou should really throw out. Really good ones are still lacking however.

This I like best atm:

Jhono Bashian wrote:
try to find it!

I prefer your fashion work over your nude stuff.Keep experimenting with that, I feel you can achieve some great images there (atm lighting and posing could be better).

Rayne Tupelo wrote:
I would love a critique! :-)

You show some very creative artwork,very nice!

I like this picture & concept:
18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31356361

MiGel wrote:

I'm not impressed by your port. Can't find one I really like, sorry.

Challenge accepted I hope you will find one of my future works to be worthy

Scott Sullivan Photo wrote:
Interested.

It's a bit too dark, but this I like:
18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30895613

Your port does not show me a clear direction, it's very mixed in quality, subject, lighting etc.

PicturePerfectImage wrote:
Are you still working on this? I would love to hear your comments..

Your pictures have a "penthouse"-like style, quiet vivid and focused on the models, which mostly also look like that "california girl"-type (as far as a non-american like me can imagine). Surprisingly enough you don't go for glamour & nudes. So your works altogether appear a little half-baked. Your fashion is no fashion, your glamour seems like a starting flirt without getting anywere. Some of your "Themes" could be a beginning of a dirty story...
I'd say don't hold back any longer and go full throttle!

This I like best so far though on the full res it looks like you went too heavy with the face retouch.

sensual light studios wrote:
OK

First, you write: "[...]I've been shooting for 30 years[...]"
How come noone ever shot for "7 years" or "12" or "21"? Why is it always 20, 25 or 30?
Years don't count. Quality does.
Also: "I've done 70+ model shoots".
Shoot numbers don't count. Quality does.

You don't show much pictures, but they could be enough if they were more various. You only show 2 models & 2 shoots. This is not enough, especially not with your proclaimed history. They also needed to be sorted out better, pick only the best.
I don't think your port would attract much models yet. They'd much more likely come (only) for the money.

Lori Hart wrote:
Curious.

You already described yourself as an amateur, and so are your shots 'til now.
Not an image I do really like.

Folly Photographe wrote:
If your still going up !

Very nice, artistic b/w-pictures. You have no fear to experiment and it shows and looks like it's improving and liberating your photography.

MiGel wrote:

It's a bit too dark, but this I like:
18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30895613

Your port does not show me a clear direction, it's very mixed in quality, subject, lighting etc.

Thank You miGel...

You are correct, this portfolio is a sample of my work as I work on completing my BFA and as such does show work from almost 5 years ago, and lacks the updated feel of a professional portfolio.

thank you for bringing that to my attention.

S

MiGel wrote:

Your pictures have a "penthouse"-like style, quiet vivid and focused on the models, which mostly also look like that "california girl"-type (as far as a non-american like me can imagine). Surprisingly enough you don't go for glamour & nudes. So your works altogether appear a little half-baked. Your fashion is no fashion, your glamour seems like a starting flirt without getting anywere. Some of your "Themes" could be a beginning of a dirty story...
I'd say don't hold back any longer and go full throttle!

This I like best so far though on the full res it looks like you went too heavy with the face retouch.

Thanks MiGel,

Appreciate your critique. Ironically enough, I have been studying new retouch techniques to help with the issue you mentioned.

I am just getting into fashion and am excited to explore that full throttle.

Thanks!
All the best!