Forums > Critique > Swuimsuit & More Shoot With A Female Model

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ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Hi everyone,
Since I have gotten comments in the past about me shooting guys better than girls, I have been shooting with more female models lately in order to improve on that.  So here is my newest shoot.  Let me know what you think overall and if you think I should add any of them to my port (don't worry about what category the images fall under, just pick what you like best, if any).  Thanks!

NUMBER 1
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/AA_zpsa1c63b9f.jpg

NUMBER 2
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/XD_zps8da9978d.jpg

NUMBER 3
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_0411-Edit_zpsdc564858.jpg

NUMBER 4
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/DDD_zps02d0f724.jpg

NUMBER 5
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/DD_zps604839db.jpg

NUMBER 6
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_0664-Edit_zps0e8e589c.jpg

Sep 20 14 02:42 pm Link

Photographer

LA StarShooter

Posts: 2731

Los Angeles, California, US

2, 4, 6 I think that because the women are more exposed--bare arms and legs in swimsuit particularly care has to be paid to skin. Like your angles and the energy is good--I picked the ones with good angles but with the best emotion.

Sep 21 14 07:49 am Link

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Joseph William

Posts: 2039

Chicago, Illinois, US

2 is just really sweet and 5 I like

Sep 21 14 07:54 am Link

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Z_Photo

Posts: 7079

Huntsville, Alabama, US

I like 2 and 4 best.  I lso like 6 except for the skin fold on her right side.

Sep 21 14 07:54 am Link

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Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Of the photos 4 gets my vote

In 3 of the photos you have the model leaning against a wall, that is distorting the shape of the arm. Also greater distance from the wall means you can place it out of focus so it is less of a distraction

Sep 21 14 11:41 am Link

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GSG Photography Studio

Posts: 221

Portland, Oregon, US

Swimsuit is misspelled in your title!

Sep 21 14 11:46 am Link

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Culturally Destitute

Posts: 551

Seattle, Washington, US

2, 4, & 5 get my vote.

Sep 21 14 11:56 am Link

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Motordrive Photography

Posts: 7087

Lodi, California, US

I like #2 and #5, they seem to hit the right chord.
#1 looks a bit sleepy eyed and tongue on teeth doesn't fit the mood.

Sep 21 14 12:57 pm Link