August 09, 2009 9:23pm Ok - IMO the color, lighting is great. Framing a bit too angular, the truck is a bit distracting because it drags your eye out of shot.
You - this kind of thing is perfect for you. You have beautiful proportions and you can do this 'peer out from within' sort of thing that is brilliant. Your expression looks like you're expecting someone or something (traffic?) and you look cautious about that. So really the only things are the photog should have lost the truck and made the shot a little less angled (but hey I wasn't there and he did a fab job) You on the other hand are darn near flawless here.
June 06, 2009 1:50am Now this is art! Natural light reflecting off of surfaces, the composition, the location, the sign in the background, and a laundry cart! And of course you. You are dressed perfectly for the scene. Your expression and pose is perfect. A great job by everyone involved....Best wishes and hope to see more work like this.