September 15, 2006 11:30pm You're off to a good start, as you have some very good photos in your port. This is, by far, your best commercial looking shot, and I think you have the "look" that is used in fashion and advertising. What I do suggest is that you might want to post some headshots where you're looking into the camera, so that others can see how you connect to the viewers. I always tell my models, "talk to me with your eyes", when doing a head shot. Can't wait to see more of your work. Best of luck in your new career.
