I'd like a little feedback on the new bio I wrote for my site:

http://www.gabriel-diaz.com/Bio.htm

I don't know if maybe it's just too informal, or too long, or...? The old one was of the third-person variety (but also written by me, lol), and really boring. It's also irrelevant now, as it harped on and on about journalism and recently, of course, I decided to go back to my first love and keep shooting women.

Maybe I should put in more about what I can do for a client (and thus why I should be hired), etc?

TIA

I see nothing wrong with your bio. And thanks for getting rid of the old one written in the third person!

No problem, lol. I always hated it anyway. Thanks for the reply!