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Forums > Critique > TOP AGENCY.........critique

Model

Tiffany Wei Ling

Posts: 214

Santa Cruz, California, US

BOBBY DIMARZO wrote:
Hey !! would the Agency you work for as a Janitor approve  of you critiqueing models.
I really do'nt think so .

^_^
big_smile haha

Feb 15 08 04:10 pm Link

Model

Sharon V

Posts: 228

Hammond, Illinois, US

ok...OK!  I read ALL 19 pages of critiques....I can't stand it...I've just GOT to know what the Janitor thinks!!!

Feb 15 08 04:46 pm Link

Photographer

UNCOMMON Stock

Posts: 881

Pompano Beach, Florida, US

I'd love the thoughts from a "Rubbish Transportation Engineer" as well ;-)

M

Feb 15 08 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

Tiffany Wei Ling wrote:

^_^
big_smile haha

Hey, they were going to throw the photos out anyway

I need to spread this information.  I kind of feel like James Bond did when he discovered
valuable information.

Please dont notify all the top agencys, they will be shaking down all their janitors.

lol

Feb 15 08 06:39 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

Sharon vanderHorst wrote:
ok...OK!  I read ALL 19 pages of critiques....I can't stand it...I've just GOT to know what the Janitor thinks!!!

Well

First of all
you need to go eat cheeseburgers and frys, with a super size shake.
Your body is to perfect

The only thing I would do differant if I was you is take the footprints out of the sand behind the shot

Cause I was buying this washed up on the beach theme till I saw the footprint
then I snapped back into reality

Thank you for asking the opinion from the Janitor thread

I hope you dont get mad and tell all your friends how mean I am.
I am actually a very nice guy

Its nap time now

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080214/08/47b445d2994bb.jpg

Feb 15 08 06:49 pm Link

Model

Stacey S

Posts: 3131

Long Beach, California, US

*peeks in*
I'm curious to hear what you have to say about me.
smile

Feb 15 08 06:51 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

UNCOMMON Stock wrote:
I'd love the thoughts from a "Rubbish Transportation Engineer" as well ;-)

M

When I opened your picture page I said one word

No not "trash" but rather "wow"

Your choice of models was the first thing I noticed.
The feel you leave in each photo is one that I try for myself, and that is to leave the viewer feeling as if they are there seeing the person themselves, rather than feeling like they are looking at a "POSE" photograph.

I could also point out the lighting in each photo was calculated for perfection.

Wanna hang out sometime?  Maybe I can look into your trash can
( and steal your secrets)

You are a master at photography. Thanks for asking me to look

https://img7.modelmayhem.com/070410/14/461bde1f985d2.jpg

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Feb 15 08 06:54 pm Link

Model

Nelson Antonio

Posts: 484

Manhattan, Illinois, US

Ok im in.

Feb 15 08 06:55 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

Stacey S wrote:
*peeks in*
I'm curious to hear what you have to say about me.
smile

I see a nice quality portfolio in the making.
Again like the last crique, in many of your photos I feel as  I am there ( as a veiwer) rather than feeling like I am looking at a pose photograph.

You have worked with some good photographers as well as put in a a nice effort yourself.

Now go more of it
Can I suggest some Armani style black and whites with a male model?
Remember, men are just furniture in the shot, its all about YOU

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/071018/01/4716f26ac7988.jpg


Thank you for asking my opinion

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Feb 15 08 06:59 pm Link

Model

Bryan Martins

Posts: 372

Ludlow, Massachusetts, US

I'm jealous of all the people getting these amazing critiques. I'm thinking I am trash can worthy. I do have a lot of work to do though.

Feb 15 08 07:02 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

Nelson Antonio wrote:
Ok im in.

Nelson Nelson

Looking good man. Wish I would of ran into you this past week to get to work with you.
Your look is unique, and refreshing.

I could see you stomping down the runway. That is not hard to imagine.
Hope you are keeping busy.  What a wonderful city you are in.

The only critique I could suggest and I might be wrong, is try and put on a little weight.
I know its tough being one of those that can eat anything and not get fat.
We all feel so sorry for those people...........lol
Keep up the nice work


I suggested to the previous critique that she do some photos similar to Emporio Armani style, YOU are the guy she needs
You are her furniture in the shot

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/071215/21/47648fe580a8c.jpg

Feb 15 08 07:04 pm Link

Model

Kelly Bradley

Posts: 373

Windsor, Ontario, Canada

Me please

Feb 15 08 07:06 pm Link

Model

Nelson Antonio

Posts: 484

Manhattan, Illinois, US

FashionTime wrote:

Nelson Nelson

Looking good man. Wish I would of ran into you this past week to get to work with you.
Your look is unique, and refreshing.

I could see you stomping down the runway. That is not hard to imagine.
Hope you are keeping busy.  What a wonderful city you are in.

The only critique I could suggest and I might be wrong, is try and put on a little weight.
I know its tough being one of those that can eat anything and not get fat.
We all feel so sorry for those people...........lol
Keep up the nice work

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/071215/21/47648fe580a8c.jpg

Thanks a lot man. Def keeping myself busy. But since fashion week is over now back to shooting! And actually you hit the nail on the head and agree i'm one of those that eats everything and not gain a pound (for now). But def next time you're in town dont hesitate to contact me, you have outstanding work.

Feb 15 08 07:11 pm Link

Photographer

S A Martin Photography

Posts: 1337

Portland, Oregon, US

I'm just getting started ... go ahead love me or hate me.

Feb 15 08 07:11 pm Link

Model

Candace

Posts: 105

Utica, Michigan, US

Awww I was skipped?  I would like to hear what you have to say. smile

Feb 15 08 07:11 pm Link

Model

Ramy

Posts: 387

Cape Coral, Florida, US

DO ME!

Feb 15 08 07:13 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

Kelly Bradley wrote:
Me please

Kelly

Where do I start.
First of all I think you have an amazing unique look.
So many look like everyone else ( bleach, make-up caked on)

I especially like your face.  You are the girl that every guy wishes he gets to sit next to in class. Sure he gets a F cause he cant concentrate on his work, all he does is stare are your beautiful face.

As for photos, I would hope you get with some good photographers.
Even know that many of the good ones are leaving this site, there are still a few left.
I hope you can find them, or better yet, I hope they can find you.

If they dont, and you are tired of the cold, grab your boyfriend and come down to California. I would love to work with you.

https://img7.modelmayhem.com/070424/01/462d964c745a1.jpg

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Feb 15 08 07:15 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

Candace wrote:
Awww I was skipped?  I would like to hear what you have to say. smile

Busy Janitor, sorry for those I missed.

I think you hate modeling

having to work with handsome guys is not easy on a girl

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080213/20/47b396f8b6bc9.jpg


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Feb 15 08 07:18 pm Link

Model

Claire Lynette

Posts: 5198

Tecumseh, Missouri, US

Since I am totally new to all of this, I will ask you for your opinion on me, if you have the time.  I have only done 2 real photo shoots so far (in my entire life.) Been kind of scared to ask, yet just like the cat....Curiosity has killed me. 

Thank you for your time.

Feb 15 08 07:19 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

Bryan Martins wrote:
I'm jealous of all the people getting these amazing critiques. I'm thinking I am trash can worthy. I do have a lot of work to do though.

Bryan

From your main photo it is apparent someone put you in your corner for a time out


Now sit there until you learn to be patient......lol

Feb 15 08 07:20 pm Link

Model

Jen Kendall

Posts: 1731

Los Angeles, California, US

I love you FashionTime smile

Feb 15 08 07:22 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

Sooner1300 wrote:
Since I am totally new to all of this, I will ask you for your opinion on me, if you have the time.  I have only done 2 real photo shoots so far (in my entire life.) Been kind of scared to ask, yet just like the cat....Curiosity has killed me. 

Thank you for your time.

Well for being a busy mom, i am glad you have a little time for you.

What caught my attention was your MAIN PHOTO.
It draws you in, and gives the "non pose" feel. I like the hair cut and "look away" feel.

Keep shooting, and when its warms up go outside.
I like the fact that your photos are classy and that you are having fun with it.
Being a mom is busy, but it is the most important job on the planet  times 3

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080211/09/47b05c03e9063.jpg

Feb 15 08 07:24 pm Link

Model

Claire Lynette

Posts: 5198

Tecumseh, Missouri, US

Thank you soo much for your comment.  I am trying to have as much fun as possible, I am thankful that shows.

Feb 15 08 07:27 pm Link

Model

Frenzy

Posts: 49

Shurugwi, Midlands, Zimbabwe

trash can or not? smile

Feb 15 08 07:29 pm Link

Hair Stylist

HairByTrinity

Posts: 512

Mission Viejo, California, US

me next. please and thank you.

Feb 15 08 07:35 pm Link

Model

Sergio C

Posts: 50

Celebration, Florida, US

What about me? Do I make it?

Feb 15 08 07:36 pm Link

Model

sammyswaffy

Posts: 756

Orlando, Florida, US

*closes eyes*

Ok...tell me!

Feb 15 08 07:37 pm Link

Model

Bryan Martins

Posts: 372

Ludlow, Massachusetts, US

FashionTime wrote:

Bryan

From your main photo it is apparent someone put you in your corner for a time out


Now sit there until you learn to be patient......lol

LOL. Very cute Mr. Janitor. I will patiently wait my turn in time out. I wouldn't want to get a spanking.

Feb 15 08 07:41 pm Link

Hair Stylist

HairByTrinity

Posts: 512

Mission Viejo, California, US

Bryan Martins wrote:

LOL. Very cute Mr. Janitor. I will patiently wait my turn in time out. I wouldn't want to get a spanking.

skandelous!

Feb 15 08 07:45 pm Link

Model

Sharon V

Posts: 228

Hammond, Illinois, US

Gods ROTT!!!  I can't believe you noticed the FOOTPRINTS!   Well, I guess that's a pretty good critique.... I'm telling my coach that the Janitor told me I could have that super-sized combo.... so THERE!

Thanks man!!!

S

Feb 15 08 07:47 pm Link

Model

Candace

Posts: 105

Utica, Michigan, US

No I don't hate modeling.. I love it.. Its great to work with hot guys.. smile

Feb 15 08 07:48 pm Link

Model

Nidia Helena

Posts: 18

Palm Beach, Florida, US

critique me smile

Feb 15 08 07:49 pm Link

Model

S A R

Posts: 65

Chicago, Illinois, US

I'm always up for someones opinion smile

Feb 15 08 07:55 pm Link

Photographer

Jourdan Laws

Posts: 136

Orlando, Florida, US

i think i got skipped

Feb 15 08 08:01 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

I will get to everyone. Please be patient

or you get a time out and have to sit in the corner like the guy above.

( the site is having some SLOW problems) If I click on your portfolio many times it is not coming up cause of some slow issues.

Plus I have to clean the floors, windows, and take the trash out.

Please be patient and if you have to go, check back.

Feb 15 08 08:09 pm Link

Photographer

FashionTime

Posts: 681

Laguna Beach, California, US

Ok I found one of the reasons this site is slowing down.

People are posting photos that are MELTING the main server computer


like this model ( who asked for a critique)

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080201/18/47a3a85aa4f77.jpg



being so naturally beautiful is causing a hit over load and once again Model Mayhems computer is going to blow up if it continues

Please girl, get with a top agency and get your incredible self off this site
You are melting the transistors and circuits

Feb 15 08 08:13 pm Link

Model

Kristen_Rayne

Posts: 216

Aurora, Colorado, US

I'll go.
I know I need to have more variety in my porfolio and that I'm small...but what else...is good? do I need to work on? interesting thoughts?

Feb 15 08 08:14 pm Link