gypsyfashionista wrote:
I'm in

2 – I’d shoot you if you pay me money

I see nothing in your port.
I mean I don’t see you.
I have no way to figure out your body shape.
I don’t see big clear headshot
I can go through your port; 5 minutes later I can meet you in the street and I won’t recognize you

Alex Davenport wrote:
Sure.

4 – I’d pay for shooting you if I have relevant project and you can sign appropriate release
Good verity. Nice body shape.
Good taste.
But please go through the port and delete those 2-3 pictures where you have scared, rigid look. Or were you cold? I don’t know. You look unconfident on those.

For example this.

Ask Christopher to give you other one. This picture sells him, as the photographer who feels the light. I doesn’t sell you.

mark b hampton wrote:
Give it a shot

0 – I’d not waste my time with you
I have nothing special on your port, nothing to believe that you can create images I’d like to buy.

No interesting composition, no decisive moment, no creative use of light, no unusual post processing, no thought, no planning, no spontaneity
Nothing. Dead.
Those pictures evoke no emotions in me.

V Powell wrote:
Ok, give me a go!

4 – I’d pay you to make pictures with me or my close relative and I’d sign you full release
Classic sense of composition.
Distinctive style
High technical quality
I really like this style of post-processing.

The only complain is predictability.
I believe that if you show me the model I can guess what picture you are going to make using the person.
Looks like you learned to do some things really really well and stopped. Are you scared to try new things? Are you afraid of  making picture that isn’t up to your standards?

With you level of craft skills you can grow only in direction of higher creativity.
Make something different

Try some crazy themes.

Get out of you comfort zone and experiment with other lighting techniques
Live. Breath. Don’t stop!

OLJ studio wrote:

1- I won’t shoot you unless you pay UNUSALLY BIG money
You modeling port screams: “I’m photographer!!!!!!”
It doesn’t sell you as model. It’s all about appreciation of photographer skills and creativity.
I’d expect very hard time working with you, when you’re constantly trying to imagine how your pose works for this lighting and adjusting according to your perception of photographer vision.
It’s like “Doctors are the worst patients”
I’d be nightmare

LOL!

Since when is having an awareness a bad thing? I find you're critique amusing because I do know how to pose, I do know when my face is hitting the light properly. I know how to express any mood that the photographer asks and yes, I do understand photography as well. I don't take it upon myself to take over a shoot, as I am a MODEL. I'm actually rather easy to work with, certainly easier than a dead duck that just stands there.

So again, how is knowledge a bad thing?

OLJ studio wrote:
1- I won’t shoot you unless you pay UNUSALLY BIG money
You modeling port screams: “I’m photographer!!!!!!”
It doesn’t sell you as model. It’s all about appreciation of photographer skills and creativity.
I’d expect very hard time working with you, when you’re constantly trying to imagine how your pose works for this lighting and adjusting according to your perception of photographer vision.
It’s like “Doctors are the worst patients”
I’d be nightmare

Cris Ashley wrote:
LOL!

Since when is having an awareness a bad thing? I find you're critique amusing because I do know how to pose, I do know when my face is hitting the light properly. I know how to express any mood that the photographer asks and yes, I do understand photography as well. I don't take it upon myself to take over a shoot, as I am a MODEL. I'm actually rather easy to work with, certainly easier than a dead duck that just stands there.

So again, how is knowledge a bad thing?

I didn’t insult you by comparing to “dead duck”
I’ve compared you to good model.
And your awareness subconsciously makes you to overanalyze.

You have great body, you are beautiful woman.
And what do I see on you port?
The first row of image is the most important. People put there images that they really love.
The whole your first row is about creativeness of photographer.
You aren’t selling photographer on your port.
You are selling model.

First row should be
this 18+

and

Looking on your port I’m afraid that you in your mind would instinctively judge my light, my composition during the shoot.
You may say no word, but in your mind you would think how you would do this.

It’s not knowledge is bad thing.
It’s inability to hide your knowledge is bad thing

Sheyna1 wrote:
Go for it

3 – I’d shoot you and accept full commercial release as a payment
You have all required ingredients in your port.
I know that if I shoot you we can create good images.
I don’t see some spark there. I don't believe that I’m getting something special and unique if I hire you
You need more verity of emotions and some images that would appear less staged.
I always see that you are posing.

ChristineLC wrote:
Me please!

3 – I’d shoot you and accept full commercial release as a payment.
You need to make some housecleaning.
I think 37 pictures are too many for your port.
Trim the number down to say 12-16. 20 is max.
You have too many similar images. It’s boring.
You are deflating impression by this.

You have some very nice lifestyle images.
This one is great


You have way too many headshots.
Pick two and delete the rest.


And your fitness/dance pictures.
First I see the good once




And the rest are so inferior to this... If I consider hiring you based on those pictures I’d drop the idea the moment I see the rest.

The same is with pinup. Some good pictures are counterweighted by mediocre.

Remember, you are as good as the worst picture on your port.
Go for quality, not quantity

Anne of Ohio wrote:
Not to suck  up..but I love your port....so Im in..what do ya think??

anne

you're perfect.

you don't need critique. you need worship ;]


how's THAT for sucking up?

Miss Alison wrote:

anne

you're perfect.

you don't need critique. you need worship ;]


how's THAT for sucking up?

I love you....Thank you

Anne of Ohio wrote:

I love you....Thank you

anytime, I love hitting on pretty ladies.
...
imagine that being said in matthew mcconaughey's voice as he plays that character from Dazed & Confused.

Ha!

Grego Cesco wrote:
haha this promises to be good do me please

4 – I’d pay for shooting you if I have relevant project and you can sign appropriate release
You obviously know what you are doing.
You have highest quality imagery on you port.
I especially like the composite with 18 expression.
Really great idea. I’d expand it and add some dramatically negative emotions there as well as some excitements.

Also you are lacking good headshot.
Just clean and simple, without dramatic lighting.
This one
doesn’t count.
Lighting is too dramatic and I don’t see your eyes.

Also your 18 emotions image suggests that you are into commercial. However you show no good commercial pictures. If you have something good, put them online. If you don’t have, make them.

Geminigirl88 wrote:
I think I got skipped

No, you are in the list.
Check on the first page

kinziee wrote:
yes please

3 – I’d shoot you and accept full commercial release as a payment
Good start.
Very nice headshots.

Also kudos to Marquelle for ability to make so different looks and styles.

With exception to this picture

i see no your contribution.
On all other pictures you are merely prop, mannequin. You are too rigid and posed.
They are nice artistic pictures but they don’t show YOUR abilities.
Also you need at least one picture where you are standing so I you potential customer could see your general appearance, shape, posture.
It’s better to do it in some sporty outfit that would underline your body structure