James germain wrote:
avii. hit me

- Out of focus
- Bad lighting
- Wrinkled up sheets that don't even cover the whole background
- Models feet are cut off
- Hate the positioning of her legs
- The colors are all whacky. She's orange.

Sorry but honestly, I can't think of anything good to say about this shot other than the fact that the model is pretty

MeganGardner wrote:

I agree, this is your best.
The only thing that could make this better would be a bit more light in the eyes. Other than that it is absolutely perfect as is. Listed.

Al Kelly wrote:


go for it

This is a really cool look. I love your work and the only negative thing I have to say has nothing to do with you. The model is looking up too high and it makes her eyes look completely whited out.

Your portfolio is pretty awesome.

MeganGardner wrote:

This is a really cool look. I love your work and the only negative thing I have to say has nothing to do with you. The model is looking up too high and it makes her eyes look completely whited out.

Your portfolio is pretty awesome.

thanks for the compliment.looks like i need to give her a pupil .never noticed that b4 but i totally see what you are saying.i will fix thanks!!!

Carey Hess Photography wrote:
Give it to me!! We'll just use my main pic for this.

You have so much better than this in your portfolio.

- The left side of the shot is totally blown out
- Over saturation makes her face look orange and bright pink in spots
- The styling is kinda a mess too

Chris Keeling wrote:
I have no idea what my best is....so I'll just use my avi......

- I really do not like her makeup
- The positioning of her arms is a bit weird. The one on the left looks like there is no hand and the one on the right looks like her wrist and hand are growing out of her chest.

You have some really awesome shots in your portfolio and a lot of them are much better than this.

Jason Todd Ipson wrote:
This is too funny!  I'm only posting because Chris did... I guess I'm a follower.

You people are making this hard on me...
this shot is gorgeous.
I'm sitting here trying to find something bad to say, but I really can't come up with anything. Even the odd crop works here.
You get away with no insults and a listing

MeganGardner wrote:

- I really do not like her makeup
- The positioning of her arms is a bit weird. The one on the left looks like there is no hand and the one on the right looks like her wrist and hand are growing out of her chest.

You have some really awesome shots in your portfolio and a lot of them are much better than this.

Ok, I'll yank it and all the money it's made me out of my port right now.........NOT!


Hee hee.....thanks Megan. 

Chris Keeling wrote:

Ok, I'll yank it and all the money it's made me out of my port right now.........NOT!


Hee hee.....thanks Megan. 

haha I'm just overly analytical and like to nit-pick
you know you're awesome

Ana Ochoa Productions wrote:
my avatar!

- That one strand of hair going across her face is driving me nuts.
- I don't like the blown out spot on the right cheek and her nose

MeganGardner wrote:
- The left side of the shot is totally blown out
- Over saturation makes her face look orange and bright pink in spots
- The styling is kinda a mess too

I love you!! haha!!

__Rose wrote:
This one please!

- Pigtails...why?! They really don't look right with the shot.
- The sheet around you makes you look shapless

Formula One Photography wrote:
this may not be my best, but I love this series & no one will ever comment on it

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The concept is cool, however...the shots aren't.

The composition on these shots is not very good at all. It looks like you put no thought into it at all.

You do much better work than these.

MeganGardner wrote:
You people are making this hard on me...
this shot is gorgeous.
I'm sitting here trying to find something bad to say, but I really can't come up with anything. Even the odd crop works here.
You get away with no insults and a listing

Damn it!  Okay, I'll screw up better next time...

Thanks for over riding your insults and adding me to your list instead...  LOL.

All the best in 2009!

Eric B Photography wrote:

I love this shot but there are a few minor things I'll point out

- Too dark under left eye
- hair blends into the background too much

Kymberly Jane wrote:
this isnt My favorite on my page..but its the most popular:

-The crop is a bit strange. Most of your limbs are oddly cutoff
- The bottom of a picture from or something is in the top of the picture
- Wrinkles in arm pit

You look fantastic though

Cindee K wrote:

- You look disgusted. I'm actually undecided on if I like it or not.
- The outer half of your eyebrow looks odd
- I would have taken out the earring for this shot

Digital Dimensions wrote:
I wanna play...

-The lighting sorta sucks. The model is way too dark...and orange/pink
- The end of her foot is cut off

Definitely not the best shot in your portfolio. You have much better.

MeganGardner wrote:

-The crop is a bit strange. Most of your limbs are oddly cutoff
- The bottom of a picture from or something is in the top of the picture
- Wrinkles in arm pit

You look fantastic though

your rad.. everyone Juices me up.. how strange.. Finally someone as honest as the world IS brutal~

MeganGardner wrote:

I LOVE this shot. You look absolutely amazing and it is definitely your best shot. I was just about to list it, but apparently I already did that.
The only thing I don't particularly like is that your hands look pink/purple. Other than that, I am in love with this shot. Awesome work.

thanks lol. the hand thing is when i get cold lol!!!