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Photographer

Tony Sharp Chicago

Posts: 184

Chicago, Illinois, US

I did the first 15 pictures:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pics.php?id=11712

I'm pretty proud of the work we did.

Comments are always welcome. smile

Jul 11 05 12:32 pm Link

Photographer

Jack D Trute

Posts: 4558

New York, New York, US

not bad,  some good.
Have the guy put some titles on so that we can give a better critique.

Jul 11 05 01:49 pm Link

Photographer

Tony Sharp Chicago

Posts: 184

Chicago, Illinois, US

I can't think of anything to name them other than 1, 2, 3, 4, and so on.

Jul 13 05 02:02 am Link

Photographer

Jack D Trute

Posts: 4558

New York, New York, US

Posted by Tony Sharp: 
I can't think of anything to name them other than 1, 2, 3, 4, and so on.

better than nothing

Jul 13 05 02:03 am Link

Photographer

Tony Sharp Chicago

Posts: 184

Chicago, Illinois, US

Posted by Jack D Trute: 

Posted by Tony Sharp: 
I can't think of anything to name them other than 1, 2, 3, 4, and so on.

better than nothing

Or you could always mentally number them? The first picture (1), the next (2), and so on. smile

Jul 13 05 10:13 am Link

Photographer

Tony Sharp Chicago

Posts: 184

Chicago, Illinois, US

Anyone? ^_^

Jul 14 05 10:21 am Link

Photographer

John Lavery

Posts: 304

Manchester, Connecticut, US

I think your work's great, Tony. Only suggestion I would make is to blur the backgrounds so your subject stands out more. I found the shrubs and cars a bit distracting in the first few images, and I think the dumpsters detract from the alley shots. Are you shooting digital or film?

Jul 14 05 10:53 am Link

Photographer

Tony Sharp Chicago

Posts: 184

Chicago, Illinois, US

Thanks for the critique.

I'm using digital. There is an option that'll let me have blurry backgrounds, but I like seeing the backgrounds to. lol.

Jul 14 05 01:10 pm Link