Forums > Critique > Finally made it here

Photographer

Scott Story Photography

Posts: 302

Temple, Texas, US

I just joined the site last night and would love to have you look at my portfolio here and let me know what you think.  Thanks

Scott

Jul 12 05 07:33 am Link

Model

Leila

Posts: 527

Worcester, Massachusetts, US

Overall you stuff looks good. I only have one suggestion. In a few of your pictures random parts of the model are cut off, like the top of the head or just the hand at the wrist. In your avitar it's fine cause she's obviously holding onto something. But in generall you don't want to do that because it draws you eye to that part of the picture instead of the center. I know in my avitar just the top of my head is cut off. I like the picture but thats just one thing I would change. I guess it's kinda a nit-picky thing but it's a little thing you can do to give your photos a better look. Hope that makes sence.

Jul 12 05 08:27 am Link