Hey guys,
I just got into photography a few months ago and even though I like the pics i have shot I'm sure I do not see a lot of things that you guys would. Could you please take a look and point out mistakes so I can learn from them.
Thanks!

Your photos look fine for a web portfolio. Keep shooting. Think about variety. Shoot everything you see that is important to you, not just women. Look for artistic inspiration as well as money-making opportunities...