Joseph Reed Photography wrote:
Ladies,

I will tell you the following.

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10:
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10
3.  Best image:
4.  Worst image
5.  Best Physical Attribute
6.  Worst Physical attribute
7.  Lisatable?
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA (Girl with Big Boobs / Round Ass) (Akin to GWC)
9  General thoughts on your images.

I will be honest so if you don't want to hear it, don't resspond.

5 is average.

Who wants to play?

I'll play!

Emily Smiles wrote:
I want to play. What do you think bout me?

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image


5.  Best Physical Attribute eyes and long legs
6.  Worst Physical attribute upper lip is a bit thin....
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA I think you have potential to be a model....nice long lines, pretty face, nice interaction with the camera.  I know many models write "Paid only" on their ports and many of them do not mean it....it's just a marketing ploy to get cash in hand...while I understand that, don't forget that everybody starts somewhere and new models need to work with new photographers so that we can all get better.
9  General thoughts on your images. genrally like what I see....be careful that when you pose, the pose looks natural...the image that I chose as my last fav is because it looks...well posed...I mean it looks stiff...the hand in the hair looks like it was just stuck there....that is not always easy to do, but it needs to look like you were just  putting the hand their naturally. Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

Joseph Reed Photography wrote:

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image


5.  Best Physical Attribute eyes and long legs
6.  Worst Physical attribute upper lip is a bit thin....
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA I think you have potential to be a model....nice long lines, pretty face, nice interaction with the camera.  I know many models write "Paid only" on their ports and many of them do not mean it....it's just a marketing ploy to get cash in hand...while I understand that, don't forget that everybody starts somewhere and new models need to work with new photographers so that we can all get better.
9  General thoughts on your images. genrally like what I see....be careful that when you pose, the pose looks natural...the image that I chose as my last fav is because it looks...well posed...I mean it looks stiff...the hand in the hair looks like it was just stuck there....that is not always easy to do, but it needs to look like you were just  putting the hand their naturally. Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

I was not aware that my profile gave the impression of "paid work only!," as I get a good many offers for TFCD, and do mostly TFCD. What part do you suggest I re write?

myrasegal wrote:
I'll play!

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image


5.  Best Physical Attribute eyes
6.  Worst Physical attribute lack of defined hips
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA I would say you fit into the model category....based on your profile you seem to enjoy the arts, thus a model is appropriate.
9  General thoughts on your images. on your bio it says you shoot nudes....I would urge you to post at least one nude image so that those interested in shooting that category will have a better understanding of what they are going to be shooting.

DonnaToni wrote:
I'll play.

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:

hands down the best in your currnet port

4.  Worst image

Delete this photo...not flattering to you at all...

5.  Best Physical Attribute hair
6.  Worst Physical attribute images show a bit of blotchy skin...can't say for sure if that's a post process thing or a skin thing.
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA hard to tell at this point with only the 4 images in your port....so I don't want to just guess.
9  General thoughts on your images. want to see more....there are 4 images, and one of them really needs to be deleted...so only 3....more more more!

Angela Stein wrote:
I will play!

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 8
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 7 (you have more of a classic look rather than a sexy look....that's not bad at all...classic beauty is hard to find!
3.  Best image:

you should shoot with this person more often, he/she seems to bring out the best in you.
4.  Worst image

this image makes me sad...so much potential...pretty face, soft skin, rough leaves, pretty top, etc...and then it was way over processed....
5.  Best Physical Attribute legs
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose....would like to see it tapered a bit more to go along with your other longer lines.
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model for sure
9  General thoughts on your images. like the variety and can't wait to see more.  Everybody has a different opinion on what makes a good image...don't just fill up the 20 slots just to take up space...make sure they are 20 good ones.

Angela Stein wrote:
I will play!

Sorry can only play once!

Joseph Reed Photography wrote:

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image


5.  Best Physical Attribute eyes
6.  Worst Physical attribute lack of defined hips
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA I would say you fit into the model category....based on your profile you seem to enjoy the arts, thus a model is appropriate.
9  General thoughts on your images. on your bio it says you shoot nudes....I would urge you to post at least one nude image so that those interested in shooting that category will have a better understanding of what they are going to be shooting.

Thank you for a very concrete critique, I agree with you on everything....I do have lots of nudes which I send to photographers who express interest in me...so far I've gotten away with it...but I think maybe I'll have a separate portfolio for them...does anyone else do that? Hmmm. I guess that's another question for a forum! ha ha ha..if I only knew how to do that! lol....Happy New Year*

OpheliaSansMercie wrote:
I'll play!

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:

like the detailed wardrobe in this shot

4.  Worst image


Great hips, but everything else (mostly photography side) is bad
5.  Best Physical Attribute hips

6.  Worst Physical attribute hair...not it's not the colors...it looks a bit dry and frizzy...
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA GWBB/RA....I Think most models that don't pose nude unless they are "paid" are simply trying to make a buck.  There's nothing wrong with that...after all $$$ is $$$, but it's akin to a photographer who pays to see a girl nude...GWC....
9  General thoughts on your images. Can't wait to see more....love your wardrobes and locations...but many of the shots are soft....sometimes soft is good...but in the more erotic images, soft is usually not intended...kinda like the one of you on the bed with the whip....soft is bad.

Emily Smiles wrote:
I was not aware that my profile gave the impression of "paid work only!," as I get a good many offers for TFCD, and do mostly TFCD. What part do you suggest I re write?

Please see PM

Joseph Reed Photography wrote:

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:
like the detailed wardrobe in this shot
4.  Worst image
Great hips, but everything else (mostly photography side) is bad
5.  Best Physical Attribute hips
6.  Worst Physical attribute hair...not it's not the colors...it looks a bit dry and frizzy...
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA GWBB/RA....I Think most models that don't pose nude unless they are "paid" are simply trying to make a buck.  There's nothing wrong with that...after all $$$ is $$$, but it's akin to a photographer who pays to see a girl nude...GWC....
9  General thoughts on your images. Can't wait to see more....love your wardrobes and locations...but many of the shots are soft....sometimes soft is good...but in the more erotic images, soft is usually not intended...kinda like the one of you on the bed with the whip....soft is bad.

Well, I do charge for all work that won't directly benefit me-- *most* nude work falls into that category. It just seems easier to say it upfront than argue over why I won't TFP/CD/etc. for them...  (If that comes out argumentative, I'm sorry. I just thought I would explain.)

Thanks for your thoughts though! It will be helpful when I'm cleaning out my port in a few weeks. Happy New Years!

JC Liang wrote:
me?

.1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:

it's a bit over processed, but I think this image captures you the best
4.  Worst image


5.  Best Physical Attribute lips
6.  Worst Physical attribute hair....stop pulling it back, let it fly...add some bounce to it and make it shine
7.  Listable? not in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model
9  General thoughts on your images.
relax, enjoy yourself and the time in front of the camera...

Shannon Danieley wrote:
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Umm....Wow...your AVI does not even closely depict what I was expecting when I clicked on it to see the other images....

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 8.5
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 8.5
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

colors are off, skin tone is washed out, dress is not falttering on your shape.

5.  Best Physical Attribute eyes

6.  Worst Physical attribute apparent lack of hips

7.  Listable? yes and have

8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model

9  General thoughts on your images. as I mentioned above, I was very surprised on the images in the port based on the AVI....love the softer lighter look...

Indrani Rauth wrote:
sure...go for it.

Thanks! Indrani

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10:
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10
3.  Best image:

while some of the colors are distracting IMO, I like the confidence you have exuded here.
4.  Worst image


5.  Best Physical Attribute lips...nice and full
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose...would like to see it a bit more tapered
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model
9  General thoughts on your images. a lot of people think that there should only be one image from each shoot/look in your port....while I don't adhere to that striclty, you have several images (pink top) that are very simialr....might want to consider piocking one or two fhose that best represent your look and get rid of the others.

Hoot Hoot Hope wrote:
hi! I want to hear your thoughts...

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 8
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 8
3.  Best image:
http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 9ac90f.jpg
18+

4.  Worst image
http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 6326ac.jpg
18+
This really isn't a bad image...it's just my least fav in your port.

5.  Best Physical Attribute breasts are perfection
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose...in a couple of images it looks a little narrow and blocky...that could be a long lens issue so really hard to tell.
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model
9  General thoughts on your images. like what I see...you have chosen some nice images to start the port.  I think you would be great in a classic pin up type of shot.

Samantha Hahn wrote:
Happy New year!!

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 8.5
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 8
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

Actually I rather enjoy this image...simplicity...but as compared to the others in your port it's just kinda eh...but compared to other ports from other models, it's very nice....know what I mean?
5.  Best Physical Attribute breasts
6.  Worst Physical attribute apparent lack of hips
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model for sure
9  General thoughts on your images.love them...that one I chose as my fav is way cool...I'd actually be interested in purchasing a print of that...very nice.  Love the diversity as well.

Annie Reyes-Schettini wrote:
I would really like a critique from you when you get a chance. THANKS!

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 5
3.  Best image:
http://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … fe3fc5.jpg
18+

4.  Worst image

http://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … a1fddc.jpg
18+

5.  Best Physical Attribute lips
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose....not enough taper/change as the nose goes from the top down
7.  Listable? not in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Girl with Big Boobs / Round Ass
9  General thoughts on your images. too many of them are just "titty shots"....that coupled with your bio that says "IF YOU DO NOT INCLUDE THE ABOVE INFO WITH YOUR MESSAGE, I WILL READ IT AND NOT REPLY! IF THIS BOTHERS YOU IN ANY WAY, THAT IS UNFORTUNATE... " says GWBB all over it.

Acanthus Art wrote:
Me please?

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10:
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10
3.  Best image:
http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … ca6621.jpg
18+

4.  Worst image

bad MU on this one....the lips thing is hard to pull off
5.  Best Physical Attribute eyes
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose...not tapered....shold be smaller near the top and widen as it goes down...
7.  Listable? not in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model who is willing to learn and help others learn "I am happy to shoot with photogs of any level, old or new. That way, we can benefit from each other. I have no qualms with adventurousness and experimentation: I will do almost anything to make the shot right. Besides, you don't know until you try! "
9  General thoughts on your images. I applaud you for not doing the "digital weight loss" as you call it.  I would also suggest that you limit photos to 1 from each look.