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Model

Faith cruz

Posts: 43

Conroe, Texas, US

o.k....ready to hear it....smile

Jan 07 10 03:04 pm Link

Model

Faith cruz

Posts: 43

Conroe, Texas, US

Ready to hear it.....smile

Jan 07 10 03:05 pm Link

Photographer

Philip Chain

Posts: 29

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote:

Hi there smile
I like the creativity in your portfolio but i feel that the technical aspects really let you down.  Read some photography books, learn the basics, learn the rules the start to break them, it will make for better images.
This is my fav in your port:
https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090903/08/4a9fde5959341_m.jpg
This is my least fav, the crop is bad and the back is blown out.
https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100107/12/4b464b1ac36f3_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Thanks!

Jan 07 10 06:49 pm Link

Model

Crystal Quin Tero

Posts: 316

Irving, Texas, US

I would like your input! smile

Jan 09 10 03:35 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

harmony woods wrote:
o.k....ready to hear it....smile

Hi there smile
You have a really beautiful face.
This is my fav in your portfolio:
https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091110/20/4afa3f51614cb_m.jpg
You have quite a few weak shots in your portfolio but i would suggest deleting all three of these:
https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100107/07/4b45f75aafa91_m.jpg
https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100104/07/4b420ae86cc3d_m.jpg
The selective colouring is these is horrible and really add nothing to the images.
This is not good either:
https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100104/07/4b420a6a8b6da_m.jpg
Good luck in 2010!

Jan 09 10 07:45 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Crystal Quintero wrote:
I would like your input! smile

Hi there!
I would really like to see some more shots of you from other photographers.
You have FAR too many images of that yellow dress in your portfolio, you need to delete some of them, you should be aiming to cut them down to 1 or 2.
This is my fav in your port:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091230/10/4b3b99ef2d243_m.jpg
This is my least fav:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100102/00/4b3f08a1abff7_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 09 10 07:48 am Link

Model

Kiah Davis

Posts: 9

Flowery Branch, Georgia, US

me?

Jan 09 10 08:55 am Link

Model

xX ReD Xx

Posts: 243

Raymond, Mississippi, US

i'll bite =]

Jan 09 10 08:57 am Link

Photographer

Rebecca Newman Photography

Posts: 1631

Tampa, Florida, US

CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
Its a new year and we are all going to be looking to up our game in 2010, I will have a look at your port and tell you your best and worst photo smile

please smile

Jan 09 10 08:58 am Link

Photographer

The Infinite Curves

Posts: 64

Dorking, England, United Kingdom

Hit me...

Jan 09 10 09:06 am Link

Photographer

Dirk Linton

Posts: 228

Coeur d'Alene, Idaho, US

Polarize me

Jan 09 10 09:10 am Link

Photographer

Model Boutique

Posts: 3

Nottingham, England, United Kingdom

fire away!

Jan 09 10 03:50 pm Link

Model

JaimieLynn

Posts: 40

Arroyo Grande, California, US

Penny for your thoughts?

Jan 09 10 03:57 pm Link

Photographer

winterborn

Posts: 591

San Antonio, Texas, US

Alrighty

Jan 09 10 04:05 pm Link

Model

Crystal Quin Tero

Posts: 316

Irving, Texas, US

CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
Hi there!
I would really like to see some more shots of you from other photographers.
You have FAR too many images of that yellow dress in your portfolio, you need to delete some of them, you should be aiming to cut them down to 1 or 2.
This is my fav in your port:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091230/10/4b3b99ef2d243_m.jpg
This is my least fav:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100102/00/4b3f08a1abff7_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

I have a thread I started on here asking y'all (as in the forum posters) to help me decide which stay and which go, since there are too many yellow dress images! I deleted a few more and only kept 3....now I will narrow it down to 2....

I just posted a few more from another shoot. My avatar is one of them. I am doing a few more shoots in the next few weeks. It's gonna slow down for me since my Spring semester starts on the 19th and I am taking  a flex course that is going to swallow my weekends sad

Thanks for your input! smile And wishing you the best in 2010, too! smile

Jan 09 10 04:09 pm Link

Model

Lovebones

Posts: 356

Roswell, Georgia, US

Me me me

Jan 09 10 09:45 pm Link

Photographer

Renay Johnson

Posts: 125

San Diego, California, US

I'm ready for your input.

Jan 09 10 10:00 pm Link

Photographer

Krystle Ann Photography

Posts: 246

Tracy, California, US

My turn :]

Jan 09 10 10:02 pm Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Kiah Davis wrote:
me?

Hi there smile
I look forward to seeing more shoots from you!
This is the strongest in your port, great expression and contact:
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100106/21/4b456ffd393f6_m.jpg
This is the weakest in your port, you are cropped off at the end and you do not look like the stronger person, its also blurry:
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100106/21/4b45704a17b7f_m.jpg
Good look in 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:13 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Red Oswalt wrote:
i'll bite =]

Hi There smile
You have a great look!
This is by FAR by fav in your port:
https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090511/20/4a08e7a41b08e_m.jpg
This is my least fav, its very badly blown out:
http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … f0eb71.jpg [18]+
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:15 am Link

Photographer

PhillipPhotography

Posts: 2490

San Leandro, California, US

Curious smile

Jan 10 10 07:16 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Rebecca Smith wrote:

please smile

Hi there smile
You have an infectious smile big_smile
This is my fav in your port, its stunning, love the pose and contact!
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080315/03/47db7f7b7aff8_m.jpg
This is my least fav, looks like a snapshot:
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080417/13/48078bb0c7cef_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:17 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

andygreen wrote:
Hit me...

Hi there smile
You have some very beautiful images in your portfolio:
This is my fav
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090906/10/4aa3f661be5fe_m.jpg
This is my least fav, i am not a fan at all of the crop and the eyes are not sharp:
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091122/03/4b09249510431_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:19 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Dirk Linton wrote:
Polarize me

Hi there smile
You have some REALLY REALLY lovely work in your portfolio:
This is my fav in your port:
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090812/11/4a830e260da77_m.jpg
This is my least fav, the grain is very high, the lighting is very flat and I am not a fan of the crop:
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090713/16/4a5bbe3d64836_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:21 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Matt Photo-Graphics wrote:
fire away!

Hi there smile
You too have some lovely shots in your porfolio:
This is my fav in your port, great composition and model:
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090829/13/4a998d2923359_m.jpg
This is my least fav in your port, the eyes are not sharp and the model looks uncomfortable, I am also not a fan of the lighting:
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090829/13/4a998c370dc25_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:24 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

JaimieLynn wrote:
Penny for your thoughts?

Hi there smile
You have a very beautiful face.
My fav in your portfolio, this is beautiful!

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090814/23/4a8651a014c0a_m.jpg
My least fav as you look freezing and the pose is unflattering:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100109/13/4b48fb1d4b5bb_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:26 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

winterborn wrote:
Alrighty

Hi there smile
Some of your work is beautiful, however you really need to watch the creased background and blown out lighting:
This is my fav in your portfolio:
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090712/17/4a5a7945131e4_m.jpg
This is my least fav, the blown out lighting and creased background are distracting:
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100106/07/4b44a9dd771f5_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:28 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Crystal Quintero wrote:

I have a thread I started on here asking y'all (as in the forum posters) to help me decide which stay and which go, since there are too many yellow dress images! I deleted a few more and only kept 3....now I will narrow it down to 2....

I just posted a few more from another shoot. My avatar is one of them. I am doing a few more shoots in the next few weeks. It's gonna slow down for me since my Spring semester starts on the 19th and I am taking  a flex course that is going to swallow my weekends sad

Thanks for your input! smile And wishing you the best in 2010, too! smile

Hi there,
On your new shots I would delete
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091230/10/4b3b9a68837a3_m.jpg
its very close to this and its also a better photograph than the other:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091230/10/4b3b99ef2d243_m.jpg
All the very best to you and good luck with your course smile

Jan 10 10 07:30 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

tiffany cliche wrote:
Me me me

Hi there smile
You are VERY beautiful and I do not think that your port reflects yet what you are capable of.
This is my fav in your port, good pose and strong contact:
https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/070408/20/46198f9a7b0a1_m.jpg
This is my least fav, jeez is that background cluttered!
https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090114/07/496e08327b0ff_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:32 am Link

Model

AndreasMb

Posts: 3088

Saint-Louis, Alsace, France

Miaow miaow miaow!!

Jan 10 10 07:33 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Renay Johnson wrote:
I'm ready for your input.

Hi there smile
Looks like you are just starting model photography? Good start!
This is my fav in your port:
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/071209/16/475c58acd7135_m.jpg
You have way too many from the same shoot in your port, try picking just the one that you love from any shoot, delete these:
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091221/18/4b302e30cf4f4_m.jpg
and
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100107/22/4b46d40f0fa15_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:34 am Link

Model

laralara

Posts: 302

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Count me in:)

Jan 10 10 07:35 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Photos by Krystle Ann wrote:
My turn :]

Hi there smile
I have been in your portfolio before and am impressed with a lot of your work.
This is my fav in your port:
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091023/00/4ae156a5996cb_m.jpg
This is my least fav, the lighting on the arm is blown on and it looks like a snap shot:
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090526/01/4a1bac59a830d_m.jpg
I look forward to seeing what you do in 2010! All the best!

Jan 10 10 07:38 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

PhillipPhotography wrote:
Curious smile

Hi there smile
You have some lovely images in your portfolio and I love the way that you play with light:
This is my fav in your portfolio, its a super image:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100102/20/4b4018cc9036b_m.jpg
This is my least fav, the background is distracting and I am not a fan at all of the crop:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091124/01/4b0ba58f827c7_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:40 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

XSilkX wrote:
Miaow miaow miaow!!

Hi there smile
I LOVE your look, I really cant wait to see what you do in 2010!
This is my fav in your portfolio:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090916/02/4ab0ae5030663_m.jpg
This is my least fav,  its not sharp and the lighting lets it down:
http://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 30a80c.jpg
All the best for 2010!!

Jan 10 10 07:42 am Link

Model

Tiadora Pearson

Posts: 4

Mesa, Arizona, US

Whats mine?

Jan 10 10 07:43 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

laralara wrote:
Count me in:)

Hi there smile
I LOVED looking through your portfolio not only are you beautiful you are very graceful and elegant.
This is my fav in your portfolio, its just stunning (listed!)
https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090820/02/4a8d14ec0571d_m.jpg
This is my least fav, I do not like the crop and you look uncomfortable sad
http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … a3c55f.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:44 am Link

Photographer

Bri Images

Posts: 276

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

sure smile

Jan 10 10 07:46 am Link

Photographer

PhillipPhotography

Posts: 2490

San Leandro, California, US

CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote:

Hi there smile
You have some lovely images in your portfolio and I love the way that you play with light:
This is my fav in your portfolio, its a super image:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100102/20/4b4018cc9036b_m.jpg
This is my least fav, the background is distracting and I am not a fan at all of the crop:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091124/01/4b0ba58f827c7_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Thanks for taking time smile  Yea, let's rock 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:46 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Tiadora Pearson wrote:
Whats mine?

Hi there smile
I can tell that you are still fairly new, I think with more practise you would see a big difference in your port.
This is my fav:
https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090321/10/49c523332e463_m.jpg
This is my least fav, the lighting is not good:
https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090403/14/49d67e311bfca_m.jpg
All the best for 2010!

Jan 10 10 07:47 am Link