Ni Anluain wrote:
Under chin needs d&b'ed so theres a smooth tonal gradient and that thing she has going on is gone.

Personally it looks over textured, like a filter? Also skin tones are odd. look at neck area, its color doesnt fit with the rest (or its my screen) of her body like her shoulder.

ok, theres one thing thats driving me NUTS and thats the flyaway hair above her eye. Its not that noticeable in the original so whatever your doing has made it stand out. I know its not to do with skin, but but......but.....I have a thing about flyaway hairs....

This was pretty much what I was going to say, but with the addition to looking at the fine circular rings that go around her neck, in particular, on her right side.

Its not a bad go, but I think you need to consentrate much more time to looking at the fine details in the skin as this is the separation between a good shot and a flawless shot.

Try creating a b/w layer over the top of the editing layer and drop the reds and yellows (channels) in the b/w options quite low and it will help you to see these areas properly.

Hope this helps!!