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Tilli A

Posts: 358

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Hey I'd really like to know which pic in my port iS letting me down....also tell me what you thunk aBout me I'm a big girl so you can be brutal haha say whatever you like on what you don't like about my profile and portfolio.

Also any full on cRitiques on indivual photos like details would be nice.

I love essays!!

Love you guys thanks xx

Jan 23 10 09:28 pm Link

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Cobra Renee 09 to 10

Posts: 1757

Jacksonville, Florida, US

Needs to go:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091011/22/4ad2c37ae00ab_m.jpg
Too many photos, they might be fine as individuals but as a whole; its just too much. Not your fault though, as a photographer/photo editor they should have known better.


These are great images but the contrast from 'smiling' to 'dead stare' is just confusing:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100104/05/4b41ee86913a4_m.jpg
Separate them and they should be fine.

As a model you need to make sure to bring a emotion to the surface... the serious face that you are using is abit dead/blank in the eyes.
Other then that; you are beautiful and I can really see you going somewhere once you get a handle on your poses/expressions.... and trust me; we all struggle with those.

Jan 23 10 10:29 pm Link

Model

Tilli A

Posts: 358

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Cobra Renee wrote:
Needs to go:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091011/22/4ad2c37ae00ab_m.jpg
Too many photos, they might be fine as individuals but as a whole; its just too much. Not your fault though, as a photographer/photo editor they should have known better.


These are great images but the contrast from 'smiling' to 'dead stare' is just confusing:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100104/05/4b41ee86913a4_m.jpg
Separate them and they should be fine.

As a model you need to make sure to bring a emotion to the surface... the serious face that you are using is abit dead/blank in the eyes.
Other then that; you are beautiful and I can really see you going somewhere once you get a handle on your poses/expressions.... and trust me; we all struggle with those.

ok thanks well I really want to break up the combined ones and post only a few. Can you please tell me the worthwhile ones out of the three combined? Xx

Jan 23 10 11:01 pm Link

Model

Cobra Renee 09 to 10

Posts: 1757

Jacksonville, Florida, US

Tilli A wrote:
ok thanks well I really want to break up the combined ones and post only a few. Can you please tell me the worthwhile ones out of the three combined? Xx

Sure darling, I'll send you a PM on what ones I like best/feel is worthwhile.

Jan 23 10 11:09 pm Link

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Tilli A

Posts: 358

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Thanks alot guYs...I fixed them uo abit let me know how I'm going xx

Jan 25 10 01:16 pm Link