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Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

OK models... Looking at your port, would I shoot with you or re-shoot one I think could look better  and why....

Let's play!

Jean

Jan 28 10 02:30 am Link

Model

John Ujjjjjjj Xghp

Posts: 2298

Ķızıltepa, Navoi, Uzbekistan

It looks like I'm first this time smile

Jan 28 10 02:41 am Link

Model

Jillian McDonald

Posts: 182

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

me please smile

Jan 28 10 02:45 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Lisa Levin wrote:
It looks like I'm first this time smile

Yep you're first ! LOL

I would shoot you for sure. You can render nice soft emotions.

I would re-shoot this one
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100126/19/4b5fb5de319c4_m.jpg

with better make-up, more subtle and better framed...

Regards

Jean

Jan 28 10 02:47 am Link

Model

John Ujjjjjjj Xghp

Posts: 2298

Ķızıltepa, Navoi, Uzbekistan

JeanD wrote:
Yep you're first ! LOL

I would shoot you for sure. You can render nice soft emotions.

I would re-shoot this one
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100126/19/4b5fb5de319c4_m.jpg

with better make-up, more subtle and better framed...

Regards

Jean

Merci beaucoup Jean, tu es gentil. smile

And it looks like not many people like that one, so I'll probably replace it with the next image I get. (hopefully soon!)

Jan 28 10 02:50 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Jillian McDonald wrote:
me please smile

Jillian, I would not shoot with you until you explore your facial expressions a bit more....

I would re-shoot this one:

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091014/05/4ad5c2b85f4d2_m.jpg

With proper styling for pin-up. The pose ain't bad...

Regards

Jean

Jan 28 10 02:51 am Link

Model

Hayley Louise Moore

Posts: 141

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

me too..

Jan 28 10 03:18 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Hayley Louise Moore wrote:
me too..

Hayley.. I would probably not shoot with you until you feel more at ease with photography. It seems you wait for the "click" on every shot ! Relax and conect with your photogs.

I would re-shoot this one:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091202/17/4b171ae0085ee_m.jpg

You could explore the pose taking advantage of the tree :-)

Cheers

Jean

Jan 28 10 03:24 am Link

Model

Sarah Ivie

Posts: 67

WEST BLOOMFIELD, Michigan, US

What about me?

Jan 28 10 03:46 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Sarah Ivie wrote:
What about me?

Shoot: I'd give it a try...

Re-shoot: https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090902/08/4a9e8c9be4c4b_m.jpg

During magic hour with proper fill light !

Jan 28 10 04:00 am Link

Model

Cobra Renee 09 to 10

Posts: 1757

Jacksonville, Florida, US

Hmm... Me?

Jan 28 10 04:40 am Link

Model

-Veronica

Posts: 272

Orlando, Florida, US

I'm pretty new, and so my port isn't too great just yet, but I'd love to hear your opinion.

Jan 28 10 04:42 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Cobra Renee wrote:
Hmm... Me?

I would shoot with you... good potential and emotional

I would re-shoot
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091224/12/4b33c842763e3_m.jpg

More fill, better arrange what you wear...

Jan 28 10 04:43 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

-Veronica wrote:
I'm pretty new, and so my port isn't too great just yet, but I'd love to hear your opinion.

Cute and joyfull... looking forward to see more...

Cheers

Jean

Jan 28 10 04:44 am Link

Photographer

Rebecca Newman Photography

Posts: 1631

Tampa, Florida, US

count me in!!

Jan 28 10 10:18 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Rebecca Smith wrote:
count me in!!

Would shoot !

...and re-shoot this
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100115/12/4b50cf52b3337_m.jpg

Exploring different poses not showing the shoulders in the same plane as the hips and taking advantage of your hair.

Cheers

Jean

Jan 28 10 10:26 am Link

Model

L I L I T H

Posts: 1217

New York, New York, US

big_smile

Jan 28 10 10:33 am Link

Model

Annie RS

Posts: 5699

Baltimore, Maryland, US

smile me please

Jan 28 10 10:34 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

L I L I T H wrote:
big_smile

Sure I'd shoot with you anytime :-)

I'd re-shoot
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091102/10/4aef28468adb3_m.jpg

The scene is nice and very linear so would see you posing with more movements instead of linear & passive...

Cheers

Jean

Jan 28 10 10:42 am Link

Model

Curvy Krista

Posts: 164

Boca Raton, Florida, US

Me?

Jan 28 10 10:46 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Annie RS wrote:
smile me please

Annie I would shoot with you...

I'd re-shoot this one
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090908/17/4aa6f4622f824_m.jpg

Not so tight of a shot with more intimate lighting Less of a spread and aim more towards sensuality

Cheers

Jean

Jan 28 10 10:47 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Curvy Krista wrote:
Me?

Curvy i'd re-shoot this
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091008/17/4ace86094adea_m.jpg

Nice location for good shots but it looks like you have lost a contact lens or something. Need better action in this shot...

Rgards

Jean

Jan 28 10 10:51 am Link

Photographer

Rebecca Newman Photography

Posts: 1631

Tampa, Florida, US

JeanD wrote:

Would shoot !

...and re-shoot this
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100115/12/4b50cf52b3337_m.jpg

Exploring different poses not showing the shoulders in the same plane as the hips and taking advantage of your hair.

Cheers

Jean

Cool! Thanks Jean smile

Jan 28 10 12:41 pm Link