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Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

It's time to add to my lists again. Here's the lists I want to add to:

Totally Bare Poses - unique art nude poses

Bondage Work I Like - simple rope bondage (I like fine art, artistic, erotic, but not neceassarily hardcore)

Alternative Inspiration - I like clean, not so complicated for the most part concepts for this, can be goth, latex, fetish, alternative, whatever

Lovely Lingerie - with a few exceptions, I like softer glamour or more fine art type looks

Socks and Stockings Galore - shots featuring socks and stockings (but not hose or tights)

Corset Photos Loved by Dekilah - I'd really to add some waist cincher photos, again I like simple stuff

A Single Piece of Clothing - shots featuring models in a single piece of clothing (plus maybe shoes)

Lovely Long Hair Listed by Dekilah - I'd really like to add some creative uses of long hair shots

If you post a shot, I'll tell you if I listed it and give a short critique. Limit 3 shots per post.

If you post your port, I'll list what fits and critique at least one of the photos I list. If I don't find anything I'll critique the first shot in your port.

If you want to critique or comment a shot of mine, go for it, but it's not required, just appreciated.

I will try to get to everyone tomorrow, but I do have a shoot.

Jan 29 10 12:09 pm Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Find me a list !
I might find you one ? hehe

Jan 29 10 12:11 pm Link

Photographer

JEBKA Photography

Posts: 3974

Firestone, Colorado, US

I consider this alternative.

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081016/13/48f77555076d4.jpg

Jan 29 10 12:11 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

JeanD wrote:
Find me a list !
I might find you one ? hehe

You don't really have anything that fits my lists, so I'll critique your first photo:
I really love the branches, particularly the lines they create across the face. I also really like the selective blurring. It's a very earthy, but mystical photo.

Jan 29 10 12:31 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

JEBKA Photography wrote:

I would agree that it's alternative, but not the sort I'm looking for. However, I love the concept. It actually looks like a lot of fun. You picked the perfect location and the perfect model for this one.

Jan 29 10 12:32 pm Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Dekilah wrote:

You don't really have anything that fits my lists, so I'll critique your first photo:
I really love the branches, particularly the lines they create across the face. I also really like the selective blurring. It's a very earthy, but mystical photo.

Thank you :-)

Jan 29 10 12:36 pm Link

Photographer

Eclectic Vision

Posts: 8281

Toledo, Ohio, US

For your socks list?

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091203/16/4b1856fd08491_m.jpg

Jan 29 10 12:47 pm Link

Model

John Ujjjjjjj Xghp

Posts: 2298

Ķızıltepa, Navoi, Uzbekistan

Anything in my portfolio?

Jan 29 10 12:49 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Eclectic Vision  wrote:
For your socks list?

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091203/16/4b1856fd08491_m.jpg

Oh yes! I love that. Listed. Reminds me of my blueberry colored socks. I love that it is so simple, but it really works. The tilt in her face is lovely as well.

Jan 29 10 12:54 pm Link

Photographer

John Hacht

Posts: 53

Lawton, Michigan, US

Hope you find a list for me???

Jan 29 10 12:54 pm Link

Photographer

Rebecca Newman Photography

Posts: 1631

Tampa, Florida, US

how bout this for lovely long hair?

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100115/12/4b50cf52b3337_m.jpg

or this for your single item of clothing (in this case, being the green bow wink)
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100129/08/4b6309c30b26e_m.jpg

Jan 29 10 02:04 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Lisa Levin wrote:
Anything in my portfolio?

Not really anything for those lists, but you do have a great port.

Okay, I know I said I'd critique the first image if you didn't have anything for my lists, but I want to do your second one, I hope that's okay.

Crit of 2nd in your port:
It's quite honestly like a very smart schoolgirl shot, but very fashion looking (to me, for whatever that's worth). It's really so simple, but so provocative at the same time. The glasses add the finishing touch for me. Well done.

Jan 29 10 02:19 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

John Hacht wrote:
Hope you find a list for me???

This one is absolutely wonderful:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=15720605 (18+)
First off, I love how the line of her belly and ribs match that of her neck and chin. The pose alone is spectacular, but with the post work it really is wonderful, and when I say that I mean trule WONDERFUL. Listed, of course.

I also had to list this one as well:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=3834053 (18+)
That is one fine nude photo. Very elegant, and very classy.

Jan 29 10 02:25 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Rebecca Smith wrote:
how bout this for lovely long hair?

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100115/12/4b50cf52b3337_m.jpg

or this for your single item of clothing (in this case, being the green bow wink)
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100129/08/4b6309c30b26e_m.jpg

Those aren't exactly what I'm looking for. They are wonderful photos, but not quite my style.

I love the green bow, it has a really unique feel to it and it works for the photos very well.

Jan 29 10 02:26 pm Link

Photographer

Rebecca Newman Photography

Posts: 1631

Tampa, Florida, US

Dekilah wrote:

Those aren't exactly what I'm looking for. They are wonderful photos, but not quite my style.

I love the green bow, it has a really unique feel to it and it works for the photos very well.

cool. thanks for the input!

Jan 29 10 02:36 pm Link

Photographer

Werner Lobert

Posts: 474

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

You can check out my portfolio there is a variety

Jan 29 10 02:38 pm Link

Photographer

Eclectic Vision

Posts: 8281

Toledo, Ohio, US

Dekilah wrote:

Oh yes! I love that. Listed. Reminds me of my blueberry colored socks. I love that it is so simple, but it really works. The tilt in her face is lovely as well.

Thank you. smile

Jan 29 10 02:52 pm Link

Photographer

John Hacht

Posts: 53

Lawton, Michigan, US

Dekilah wrote:

This one is absolutely wonderful:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=15720605 (18+)
First off, I love how the line of her belly and ribs match that of her neck and chin. The pose alone is spectacular, but with the post work it really is wonderful, and when I say that I mean trule WONDERFUL. Listed, of course.

I also had to list this one as well:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=3834053 (18+)
That is one fine nude photo. Very elegant, and very classy.

Thanks SOOOOoo much!!!    John

Jan 29 10 02:53 pm Link

Photographer

JSVPhotography

Posts: 4897

Madison, Wisconsin, US

I might have something for your bondage list...

Jan 29 10 02:54 pm Link

Photographer

Obscuri

Posts: 521

Dallas, Texas, US

have a go at mine please

Jan 29 10 02:54 pm Link

Model

Lauren WK

Posts: 1961

Los Angeles, California, US

Dekilah wrote:
It's time to add to my lists again. Here's the lists I want to add to:

Totally Bare Poses - unique art nude poses

Bondage Work I Like - simple rope bondage (I like fine art, artistic, erotic, but not neceassarily hardcore)

Alternative Inspiration - I like clean, not so complicated for the most part concepts for this, can be goth, latex, fetish, alternative, whatever

Lovely Lingerie - with a few exceptions, I like softer glamour or more fine art type looks

Socks and Stockings Galore - shots featuring socks and stockings (but not hose or tights)

Corset Photos Loved by Dekilah - I'd really to add some waist cincher photos, again I like simple stuff

A Single Piece of Clothing - shots featuring models in a single piece of clothing (plus maybe shoes)

Lovely Long Hair Listed by Dekilah - I'd really like to add some creative uses of long hair shots

If you post a shot, I'll tell you if I listed it and give a short critique. Limit 3 shots per post.

If you post your port, I'll list what fits and critique at least one of the photos I list. If I don't find anything I'll critique the first shot in your port.

If you want to critique or comment a shot of mine, go for it, but it's not required, just appreciated.

I was going to suggest my latex corset shot, but you seem to have it on that list already!  The corset isn't really featured in this one... but maybe?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua= (18+)

Maybe this one for stockings?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua= (18+)

Alternative inspiration?

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090830/14/4a9af1beb67fc_m.jpg

I wouldn't mind an overall look if you've got the time... https://www.modelmayhem.com/pics.php?id … view_all=1  smile

Jan 29 10 02:57 pm Link

Jan 29 10 03:03 pm Link

Model

Samantha Williamson

Posts: 2045

Altoona, Florida, US

oooo ok heres my pic!

lingerie/stockings
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090824/14/4a93061eb7e9c.jpg

creative hair
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090712/14/4a5a50b92cb61.jpg

one piece
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091208/17/4b1efdfe95d23.jpg

Jan 29 10 03:30 pm Link

Model

chesty

Posts: 1978

Burbank, California, US

Dekilah, I really like the first picture in your port. I find it very feminine and erotic, without being trashy. The angle, pose and lighting are perfect!


https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091211/23/4b23445154772_m.jpg

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091228/23/4b39a9ac630d3_m.jpg

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100126/10/4b5f3bad0b135_m.jpg

Jan 29 10 04:30 pm Link

Model

Tatiana Paris

Posts: 1212

Los Angeles, California, US

Jan 29 10 04:35 pm Link

Photographer

remerrill

Posts: 3880

Arcata, California, US

hienvy
I think I might have some images that might make your lists...
at least I hope so...

Jan 29 10 04:35 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Werner Lobert wrote:
You can check out my portfolio there is a variety

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=15936583 (18+)
I love this pose. And I love her eye contact. The only thing I wish was that her other foot was completely in the camera.

Jan 29 10 05:08 pm Link

Photographer

Jaguar Photography

Posts: 519

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

I love lists...

Jan 29 10 05:13 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

JSVPhotography wrote:
I might have something for your bondage list...

I listed one of your nudes in my erotic list.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=14800981 (18+)
I love the crossing between her arms. That's a great location as well. Listed.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=13217406
This is just beautiful to me. I want to work with you based on that image alone. Listed

By the way, I love your suspension work. I don't list that because I use that list to show my comfort level as well and I don't want somebody trying that when they don't know what they're doing. I hope one day I get to do some though.

Jan 29 10 05:17 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Derek Mick wrote:
have a go at mine please

Although you have some great work, I didn't see anything for these lists.

Thus I am critiquing this photo: https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=16178958
The first thing that gets me is her eyes. I like the shot from the waist up, but from the waist down, not so much. Loving her hair and the facial expression too.

Jan 29 10 05:23 pm Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Lauren WK wrote:

I was going to suggest my latex corset shot, but you seem to have it on that list already!  The corset isn't really featured in this one... but maybe?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua= (18+)

Maybe this one for stockings?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua= (18+)

Alternative inspiration?

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090830/14/4a9af1beb67fc_m.jpg

I wouldn't mind an overall look if you've got the time... https://www.modelmayhem.com/pics.php?id … view_all=1  smile

The corset photo is awesome! I love the tendrils of hair and I'm totally jealous of how gorgeous your skin is here. It's a beautiful photo. Listed.

I also listed the stockings shot. I love the lighting there, the way it goes up your body. And your make-up is always perfect.

Oh and I looked at the rest of your port and didn't see any others to add right now, but I always look at your port three or four times a month.

Jan 29 10 05:30 pm Link

Photographer

PDF IMAGES PHOTOGRAPHY

Posts: 4606

Jacksonville, Florida, US

Hope I have something LIST-able smile

Jan 29 10 05:37 pm Link

Photographer

Jeff Fiore

Posts: 9225

Brooklyn, New York, US

Just put some new stuff up, have a look and see if any fit.

Jan 29 10 05:44 pm Link

Model

Baeli

Posts: 1016

Truro, England, United Kingdom

See any that fit?

Jan 30 10 02:34 am Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

SoCal Digital Images wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=8104756&group_id=52193&ua=

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … =52193&ua=

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … =52190&ua=    18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … =52190&ua=    18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … =52190&ua=       18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … =52190&ua=     18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … =52190&ua=  18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … =52190&ua=  18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … =52190&ua=   18+

DO any of these make your LIST?

Limit was 3 shots per post. It's a "game" but you still gotta play by the rules. Would you rather I just scan your whole port?

Jan 30 10 06:11 am Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Elaine Ford wrote:

I love the stockings one. Listed (in my lingerie list)! I particularly love your hair and the way your eyes are directed in that one.

The other two aren't quite what I'm looking for although they are great photos.

Jan 30 10 06:15 am Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

_Mei_Mei wrote:
Dekilah, I really like the first picture in your port. I find it very feminine and erotic, without being trashy. The angle, pose and lighting are perfect!


https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091211/23/4b23445154772_m.jpg

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091228/23/4b39a9ac630d3_m.jpg

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100126/10/4b5f3bad0b135_m.jpg

Those three aren't quite what I'm looking for, but I love the dress in the bottom.

The top one has a really cute fetish cowgirl thing going on. Love the expression.

And the middle one is my favorite. Makes your legs look absolutely awesome, unique perspective, and great use of shadows.

Jan 30 10 06:16 am Link

Model

Dekilah

Posts: 5236

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Tatiana Paris wrote:
Maybe for your "long Hair" list smile

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … =89715&ua=

Not quite, but it is a great photo. The pose is perfect and you definitely have the beachy wind feel going on.

Jan 30 10 06:19 am Link

Photographer

rcrampton photography

Posts: 25

London, Ontario, Canada

Hope you find something you like.
Your work is fabulous!

Jan 30 10 06:22 am Link

Photographer

FJR Photography

Posts: 7049

Pekin, Indiana, US

url=http://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=14497714]https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090929/13/4ac26a14407c9_m.jpg[/url]

Jan 30 10 06:24 am Link