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-Veronica
Posts: 272
Orlando, Florida, US
me please ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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JeanD wrote: OK Belle your turn to hit me :-) or 8-[ All of your images are so similar - you're good at what you shoot, but I would like to see you branch out, whether that be different lighting, different concepts, something to challenge yourself.
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Rebecca Smith wrote: Hey darlin...I'll have a go! Good luck finding agency representation! This is my favorite: But delete the other few from this shoot. You don't need more than one of the same look in your portfolio. Delete this too: It's an awkward angle, not at all flattering.
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Kaia wrote: I'm in! You my dear have a truly stunning portfolio. You have such a unique look and you know how to work it! Some of my favorites: and your avatar. You've found your niche - rock on!
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Jade Brennan wrote: Would love your opinion None of the images in your "fashion" album are actually fashion images.....
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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-Veronica wrote: me please ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png) You clearly have not worked with a professional photographer yet. Your profile is very vague. If you are serious about this you need to contact photographers in your area and develop a focus for what it is you want to pursue.
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Dane Halo
Posts: 1154
San Francisco, California, US
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Bah... I know I'm past the cutoff... but if you have the time? ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Dane Halo wrote: Bah... I know I'm past the cutoff... but if you have the time? ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png) You are beautiful and obviously very comfortable in your own skin. I love your nude work, though I can't post any photos here. Your profile is great too - very informative and easy to follow. You come across as very intelligent and easy-going. I can see why you have been so successful.
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DELETED-ACCOUNT_
Posts: 10303
Los Angeles, California, US
TrackBelle wrote:
You've worked with Kelli so you are automatically awesome! I'm not such a big fan of your Year One work, maybe just scrap that folder completely. Your other work is stronger. I can see models going to you for potential ZED card shots. You're too kind. Year One is finally gone. Thank you for the kind words.
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Dane Halo
Posts: 1154
San Francisco, California, US
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TrackBelle wrote:
You are beautiful and obviously very comfortable in your own skin. I love your nude work, though I can't post any photos here. Your profile is great too - very informative and easy to follow. You come across as very intelligent and easy-going. I can see why you have been so successful. Aww! Thank you so much! I very much appreciate that you took your time to critique my portfolio and profile. Thank you!
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JeanDphoto
Posts: 1346
Knowlton, Quebec, Canada
TrackBelle wrote:
All of your images are so similar - you're good at what you shoot, but I would like to see you branch out, whether that be different lighting, different concepts, something to challenge yourself.
![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090703/12/4a4e61a093349_m.jpg]() Simply because they are all part of one project as stated in profile ;-) So to me I'll take it as positive.. the next project will bring something different ! LOL Thank you Belle
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joanna anderson
Posts: 122
Portsmouth, England, United Kingdom
please would love your opinion
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Grace R
Posts: 2779
Nottingham, England, United Kingdom
Ooh have you started again?
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Grace R wrote: Ooh have you started again? Yes I have Grace. I love your headshot, it's a great avatar choice. I don't really feel qualified to critique your work, but I think you have a very professional portfolio and you are very aware of your body.
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GNapp Studios
Posts: 6223
Somerville, New Jersey, US
Appreciate your time and opinions.
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Scarlette OShea wrote: I'll go! : ) You have some really nice work. I love your facial expression here:
Delete this though - the lighting is blown out and you're not even recognizable:
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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GNapp Studios wrote: Appreciate your time and opinions. A lot of your work is very contrived and stiff, you do have some nice shots though. I know you're VIP so you have a lot of photo slots, but that doesn't mean you should just through everything up in your portfolio. This caught my eye:
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Mika
Posts: 1542
Miami, Florida, US
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Me too, if I got in before the cut off ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Mikazuki - K17773N wrote: Me too, if I got in before the cut off ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png) You look taller than 5'7 - that's a good thing. Do you want to do fashion or glamour? I'm getting more glamour vibes from your portfolio. Get rid of this one - it's cheesy:
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Stess
Posts: 80
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
me pls if ur still going ! xoxoxox
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Courtney Rapp
Posts: 38
Washington, District of Columbia, US
if you're still going....?
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Tyler Schultz
Posts: 42
Anaheim, California, US
I would love some honest feedback on my port.!
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Stess wrote: me pls if ur still going ! xoxoxox Trim your portfolio down to one shot from each look/shoot. Your avatar and this shot are your best:
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Courtney Rapp wrote: if you're still going....? Bottom row first page - 4 images that are nearly identical. Why? Also, sometime you look very "deer in the headlights" and that suggests that you may need more experience and practice so that you are comfortable in front of the camera.
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Tyler Schultz wrote: I would love some honest feedback on my port.! Everything looks like snapshots to me...keep plugging away. Try and focus on how the lighting and composition will add to a shot. Maybe try and plan out your next photo shoot a little more.
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Emma-Marie
Posts: 129
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
Just a newbie, but would love your advice..
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Sukay
Posts: 349
New York, New York, US
Okay, seems to be past 10, but if you roll again,.. ![wink](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/wink.png)
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amycore
Posts: 419
Los Angeles, California, US
If you're still critiquing, I'd love to know what you think!
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