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Model

RoBer21

Posts: 213

Baltimore, Maryland, US

I'm curious... & I want to have a strong port with what I have so far!

Feb 01 10 05:57 pm Link

Model

John Ujjjjjjj Xghp

Posts: 2298

Ķızıltepa, Navoi, Uzbekistan

Best: It shows your facial structure, and it has attitude.
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100131/13/4b65fd3fd57a5_m.jpg

Worst: Your expression makes it look like you didn't know that the photo was going to be taken. And as a photo, it looks like a snapshot. Random background and poor editing.
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100118/21/4b553f18a7440_m.jpg

I honestly think you can whittle down your portfolio quite a bit, though. And if possible, please don't use folders.

I hope that helps!

Feb 01 10 06:02 pm Link

Photographer

Daniel M Martin

Posts: 194

Los Angeles, California, US

My Favorite
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 2010-01-23 08:53:26&id=1470906&pid=16082824&the_count=8&group_id=97757&ua=

I think this one is weak
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … up_id=&ua=

Feb 01 10 06:07 pm Link

Model

RoBer21

Posts: 213

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Lisa Levin wrote:
Best: It shows your facial structure, and it has attitude.
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100131/13/4b65fd3fd57a5_m.jpg

Worst: Your expression makes it look like you didn't know that the photo was going to be taken. And as a photo, it looks like a snapshot. Random background and poor editing.
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100118/21/4b553f18a7440_m.jpg

I honestly think you can whittle down your portfolio quite a bit, though. And if possible, please don't use folders.

I hope that helps!

*Thanks for the advice... your port is very good!  It was really tough to find a "worst" picture  : )

Best:  This one is very pretty and really shows off your facial features, as well.  It is also very focused w/o a distracting background.
https://i45.tinypic.com/210ehph.jpg

Worst: It just looks a little too relaxed and abit boring... but you have a gorgeous smile.
https://i50.tinypic.com/2lsazvr.jpg

Feb 01 10 06:12 pm Link

Model

RoBer21

Posts: 213

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Daniel M Martin wrote:
My Favorite
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 2010-01-23 08:53:26&id=1470906&pid=16082824&the_count=8&group_id=97757&ua=

I think this one is weak
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … up_id=&ua=

--Your links didn't work...

Feb 01 10 06:15 pm Link

Photographer

Migtek

Posts: 369

Burbank, California, US

I think this is your worst. This picture isn't very flattering to you. You have much nicer work in your port.
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100131/13/4b65fcacd29c7_m.jpg



I was torn between this one and your avatar for your best pic. I chose this one, because I can imagine the work that went into it from all involved.  This was definitely the strongest in your fun album.

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100123/08/4b5b2985cad41_m.jpg

Feb 01 10 06:16 pm Link

Model

RoBer21

Posts: 213

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Daniel M Martin wrote:
My Favorite
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 2010-01-23 08:53:26&id=1470906&pid=16082824&the_count=8&group_id=97757&ua=

I think this one is weak
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … up_id=&ua=

**Thanks! 

Worst:  What's the point?  The focus is a wedgy and the flash in the middle is just distracting
https://i47.tinypic.com/2ug2iqe.jpg


Best: Very good lighting and it captures the great features of the model.  Focus is also good.
https://i49.tinypic.com/317bfva.jpg

Feb 01 10 06:27 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Your avatar is your best.

You have many weak shots, but this is your worst:

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100129/21/4b63bf1e0485a_m.jpg

You just look so uncomfortable and like you are trying way too hard to be "sexy"

Feb 01 10 06:29 pm Link

Model

RoBer21

Posts: 213

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Migtek wrote:
I think this is your worst. This picture isn't very flattering to you. You have much nicer work in your port.
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100131/13/4b65fcacd29c7_m.jpg



I was torn between this one and your avatar for your best pic. I chose this one, because I can imagine the work that went into it from all involved.  This was definitely the strongest in your fun album.

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100123/08/4b5b2985cad41_m.jpg

**Thank you  : )

Worst: It just doesn't have a focus and the lighting is a bit much
https://i49.tinypic.com/21zm8p.jpg

BEST: I like the over exposure a little.  It's a great shot of the model and there is a connection!  Great capture!
https://i47.tinypic.com/29p7xis.jpg

Feb 01 10 06:33 pm Link

Model

Britney A Lea

Posts: 65

Port Alberni, British Columbia, Canada

i think this is your worst you just look uncomfortable like your glaring at someone from across the room.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 2010-01-29 21:11:02&id=1470906&pid=16183585&the_count=&group_id=&ua=
not sure if my links here work

best is your advatar. its stunning and great lighting

Feb 01 10 06:36 pm Link

Model

RoBer21

Posts: 213

Baltimore, Maryland, US

TrackBelle wrote:
Your avatar is your best.

You have many weak shots, but this is your worst:

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100129/21/4b63bf1e0485a_m.jpg

You just look so uncomfortable and like you are trying way too hard to be "sexy"

**Your port is amazing... you should coach me up  smile

Worst: It's just not flattering... doesn't show you off at all.  Cool concept, just not for your portfolio.
https://i48.tinypic.com/9v9h1x.jpg

Best:  It's just plain fun and you are very pretty.  It completely focused on you and the pink background does good for your fair skin and dark hair.
https://i47.tinypic.com/i3as14.jpg

Feb 01 10 06:40 pm Link

Model

RoBer21

Posts: 213

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Britney A Lea wrote:
i think this is your worst you just look uncomfortable like your glaring at someone from across the room.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 2010-01-29 21:11:02&id=1470906&pid=16183585&the_count=&group_id=&ua=
not sure if my links here work

best is your advatar. its stunning and great lighting

---> Your link didn't work  : )

Feb 01 10 06:41 pm Link

Model

Britney A Lea

Posts: 65

Port Alberni, British Columbia, Canada

lets try this again lol
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 2010-01-29 21:11:02&id=1470906&pid=16183585&the_count=&group_id=&ua=

Feb 01 10 06:45 pm Link

Model

Britney A Lea

Posts: 65

Port Alberni, British Columbia, Canada

hmm not working sorry

Feb 01 10 06:45 pm Link

Model

RoBer21

Posts: 213

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Britney A Lea wrote:
lets try this again lol
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 2010-01-29 21:11:02&id=1470906&pid=16183585&the_count=&group_id=&ua=

Your best:  Its beautiful and cool angle!
https://i47.tinypic.com/34nmgc6.jpg

Feb 01 10 06:49 pm Link

Photographer

Migtek

Posts: 369

Burbank, California, US

Amber M ORoke wrote:

**Thank you  : )

Worst: It just doesn't have a focus and the lighting is a bit much
https://i49.tinypic.com/21zm8p.jpg

BEST: I like the over exposure a little.  It's a great shot of the model and there is a connection!  Great capture!
https://i47.tinypic.com/29p7xis.jpg

Thank you for the feedback. Regarding the "over exposure", I was playing with the lighting and exposure, tried, because the model's skin kept wanting to blend with the orange back ground.

Feb 01 10 06:50 pm Link

Model

RoBer21

Posts: 213

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Anyone Else?  : )

Feb 01 10 08:07 pm Link

Photographer

The Face Photography

Posts: 1549

Madrid, Madrid, Spain

Hi Amber,

Nice portfolio, I have enjoyed visiting it. I'll give you my opinion:

Best

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100129/21/4b63bf1e0485a_m.jpg



Worst

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091213/12/4b255004d1b8a_m.jpg


Best wishes!

Feb 03 10 12:00 pm Link

Model

amycore

Posts: 419

Los Angeles, California, US

Best
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100131/14/4b65fd655d0b3_m.jpg

Worst
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091213/12/4b255004d1b8a_m.jpg

Feb 03 10 02:33 pm Link