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Sukay

Posts: 349

New York, New York, US

Feb 14 10 04:22 pm Link

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Extremem

Posts: 636

Brooklyn, Indiana, US

LucyTheModel wrote:

This thread is so fun.  I've enjoyed reading all of your stories.

Why thank you.

Feb 14 10 05:53 pm Link

Photographer

Extremem

Posts: 636

Brooklyn, Indiana, US

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"Enter the NEXT Ninja."  Sho Kasuki's grand daughter grew up in Japan after her parents were slaughtered in San Francisco in the cross fire of a drug raid.  He raised her in the way of the ninja to avenge them.  So now with her katana and ipod she is out for revenge and justice.

Feb 14 10 05:59 pm Link

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Sukay

Posts: 349

New York, New York, US

You are my new favorite person!  Definitely drew me in with that story.  If you write it, can I be on your book cover?  wink

Feb 14 10 06:41 pm Link

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Kayla Renee

Posts: 143

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

I would LOVE a story smile

Feb 14 10 08:04 pm Link

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Jennifer Barker

Posts: 8010

Houston, Arkansas, US

ExtremeMojo Photography wrote:

This is from the classic film titled "Hell in Paradise."  A plane has crashed on a desert Island and no one knows where they are.  At this particular moment the young girl from St Paul, MN, is hiding from from a tribe of cannibals who will shortly be routed by a Tyrannosaurus Rex.

Wow .. that was great .. Cannibals and a T-Rex .. a must read wink  Thank You smile

Feb 15 10 01:22 am Link

Photographer

Extremem

Posts: 636

Brooklyn, Indiana, US

KaylaBar wrote:
I would LOVE a story smile

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From the film "Witches of Westchester." Young Ashley has moved to Westechester from Chicago.  She was forced to give up all her friends and everything she knew in the big city because her father lost his job in a marketing firm there.  Her grandmother passed away leaving her family the rundown estate in Westchester county, outside of New York City.  She soon discovers that her grandmother was a long time practitioner of magic arts.  Upon finding her spell book Ashley begins practicing the love spells on the unsuspecting Travis, the quarterback at the high school where she now attends.  Mayhem soon insues, due to the fact that Ashley can't get the spells quite right.  Travis soon develops a reputation as a player. Her new BFF Meghan finds the spell book and begins playing with it with even more disastrous results.  On accident Megnah casts a spell on Sheldon, a computer geek, who begins to woo Ashley.  Ashley is of course unaware that Meghan (the cheerleader who likes Travis) has done this and is totally repulsed by Sheldon in the beginning, but begins to come around after he hacks her myspace page and changes it to the perfect theme. thus proving his love for her.  Travis gets drafted by the NFL, Sheldon gets a high level job at Microsoft, and they all live happily ever after.

Feb 15 10 03:51 am Link

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G Reese

Posts: 914

Marion, Indiana, US

There's one or two in my port. lol



GaryR

Feb 15 10 04:03 am Link

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Kayla Renee

Posts: 143

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

ExtremeMojo Photography wrote:

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From the film "Witches of Westchester." Young Ashley has moved to Westechester from Chicago.  She was forced to give up all her friends and everything she knew in the big city because her father lost his job in a marketing firm there.  Her grandmother passed away leaving her family the rundown estate in Westchester county, outside of New York City.  She soon discovers that her grandmother was a long time practitioner of magic arts.  Upon finding her spell book Ashley begins practicing the love spells on the unsuspecting Travis, the quarterback at the high school where she now attends.  Mayhem soon insues, due to the fact that Ashley can't get the spells quite right.  Travis soon develops a reputation as a player. Her new BFF Meghan finds the spell book and begins playing with it with even more disastrous results.  On accident Megnah casts a spell on Sheldon, a computer geek, who begins to woo Ashley.  Ashley is of course unaware that Meghan (the cheerleader who likes Travis) has done this and is totally repulsed by Sheldon in the beginning, but begins to come around after he hacks her myspace page and changes it to the perfect theme. thus proving his love for her.  Travis gets drafted by the NFL, Sheldon gets a high level job at Microsoft, and they all live happily ever after.

Awesome, thanks!

Feb 15 10 05:51 am Link

Photographer

Extremem

Posts: 636

Brooklyn, Indiana, US

Sukay wrote:
You are my new favorite person!  Definitely drew me in with that story.  If you write it, can I be on your book cover?  wink

It'll be a screenplay, but you can star in the movie.

Feb 15 10 07:01 am Link

Photographer

Extremem

Posts: 636

Brooklyn, Indiana, US

G Reese wrote:
There's one or two in my port. lol



GaryR

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From the film "Gator Bait: Return to the Swamp."  Lenny is from the big city and has come down to Bayou Country looking for adventure.  He ran across the path of Lula, a fiery backwater girl with a taste for Mrs. Field's Peanut butter cookies.  Lenny managed to find her stash but couldn't make it out of the swamp before Lula was able to hog tie him and reclaim her goods.

Feb 15 10 03:47 pm Link

Model

Sukay

Posts: 349

New York, New York, US

ExtremeMojo Photography wrote:

It'll be a screenplay, but you can star in the movie.

Deal!

Feb 15 10 06:10 pm Link

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Kae Crack

Posts: 180

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

This is awesome, I have a few ... but I'll just pick one. I'm too curious for my own good. big_smile

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Feb 15 10 06:30 pm Link

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Les Jinques Photography

Posts: 337

Orlando, Florida, US

ExtremeMojo Photography wrote:

This is Alex.  This was taken shortly her her second KO.  We know that it was a KO because she looks fresh, and ready to go a few more rounds.

Side note She reminds me of Rebecca Neuenswander from "Rigged", whom is being courted to take the lead in a film I just wrote.

I like this one better:

She lost this fight:

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Wow! You are good. You even went so far as to do some Independent  research haha. Thanks! Hey I've got a screenplay idea...Roxie, over the hill fighter has one more shot at the title, an old curmudgeonly trainer and a shy boyfriend who works in a pet store? eh?

Feb 15 10 06:42 pm Link

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Bob Cassady

Posts: 384

Knoxville, Tennessee, US

Feb 16 10 05:59 pm Link

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cocowgirl777

Posts: 15

Denver, Colorado, US

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what about this one?

Feb 16 10 06:11 pm Link