Redd Dyver wrote:
Here's the rules:
Critique the last person to post on here (obviously that means I'm first to get hit)

Must say at least one thing nice... then free for all from there.
Portfolio, Profile, even google searches are fair game!

Some people may get tagteamed, if multiple people are viewing at the same time.

Yes, you may critique as often as you'd like, for as long as you can stand it.

I'll be back in a couple hours... driving from Hemet to SD... see ya once I set up there

Nice port full of pretty girls, some in a state of undress, who wouldn't like that?!  I like the menage a trois shot, very creative!!  I don't have a scathing critique, maybe try for some different angles but like I said, it is a nice port and you have worked with some quality models.  I feel like there isn't enough here, let me go look again and find some things wrong
*Edit*
What?  You couldn't get Jessica to reach for the sky?!
That is my one complaint.

VillagerArtPhotography wrote:

Nice port full of pretty girls, some in a state of undress, who wouldn't like that?!  I like the menage a trois shot, very creative!!  I don't have a scathing critique, maybe try for some different angles but like I said, it is a nice port and you have worked with some quality models.  I feel like there isn't enough here, let me go look again and find some things wrong
*Edit*
What?  You couldn't get Jessica to reach for the sky?!
That is my one complaint.

Your port is amazing! Great concepts, lighting, over all visually appealing! Your pictures are very vibrant. Good work!

DarcieK wrote:

Your port is amazing! Great concepts, lighting, over all visually appealing! Your pictures are very vibrant. Good work!

I love your look, especially in this image:


I think you have excellent potential, What I'd like to see in this portfolio is a little more diversity other than just images in the studio (Don't get me wrong that could also work if done right) A couple more good headshots would also give it a boost.

NecroOptics wrote:

I love your look, especially in this image:


I think you have excellent potential, What I'd like to see in this portfolio is a little more diversity other than just images in the studio (Don't get me wrong that could also work if done right) A couple more good headshots would also give it a boost.

Interesting style you have there, very.. different! Hahaha.
I do like them though, even though I get creeped out a little by gore. Haha. It looks like you separated your port by having guys on top and girls below.

fav:
just wish the 4th finger wasnt almost missing.

Zhiffy Photography wrote:

Interesting style you have there, very.. different! Hahaha.
I do like them though, even though I get creeped out a little by gore. Haha. It looks like you separated your port by having guys on top and girls below.

fav:
just wish the 4th finger wasnt almost missing.

Your port has a wonderful style, your locations rock and your models are gorgeous. Your portraits need work though, you're missing that 'zing' that your full length and location shots have. Get a bit more creative with hair and makeup perhaps, even facial expressions and angles? Keep up the awesome

Your port has a wonderful style, your locations rock and your models are gorgeous. Your portraits need work though, you're missing that 'zing' that your full length and location shots have. Get a bit more creative with hair and makeup perhaps, even facial expressions and angles? Keep up the awesome

I love the elegant dark feel of your images.  they are beautiful and edgy all at the same time.  The only real thing I could say that would improve the port is to ad more images.  I followed your link and found a ton of wonderful images that you should have here.  that and the image of the cowboy, although very nice it is not the strongest image in there.  you have more that I thought looked better.

JustOwen wrote:
Hammerhead,
  The redhead is a nice shot with great facial expression.  The others seem to me to be a little lifeless, but certainly not bad shots overall.

Just my amatuer two cents.

(Edited for typos)

Hammerhead Graphix wrote:

I love the elegant dark feel of your images.  they are beautiful and edgy all at the same time.  The only real thing I could say that would improve the port is to ad more images.  I followed your link and found a ton of wonderful images that you should have here.  that and the image of the cowboy, although very nice it is not the strongest image in there.  you have more that I thought looked better.

Thanks Hammerhead!

Renee Robyn Photography wrote:
Thanks Hammerhead!

You're replying to someone else, but that makes you my victim.

I could EAT this photo.



NOM NOM NOM
It's spectacularly beautiful.

Makeup and Hair by Kat wrote:

You're replying to someone else, but that makes you my victim.

I could EAT this photo.

NOM NOM NOM
It's spectacularly beautiful.

I wish you where closer to me i love this is soo beautiful and ur port is fun and playfull but with great make up work

Mysterious Nd Exotic wrote:

Makeup and Hair by Kat wrote:
You're replying to someone else, but that makes you my victim.

I could EAT this photo.

NOM NOM NOM
It's spectacularly beautiful.

I wish you where closer to me i love this is soo beautiful and ur port is fun and playfull but with great make up work