Mar 09 10 04:43 pm Link It's alright. I like the background, and the highlights on the hair. I think thy makeup looks too airbrushed though. I like the B&W version best. Mar 09 10 05:11 pm Link The whites of the eyes are too intense - looks a bit maniacal, actually. I also wouldn't have made the highlights in the lip color so bright. You didn't clean up any of the skin on her chest, which contrasts strangely with her smooth face. Overall, not terrible, but lacks some attention to detail. Mar 09 10 05:16 pm Link Thank you guys! :0 I re-edited them ![]() Mar 09 10 07:24 pm Link Dylan White wrote: In the before, she looks scary, and you made her look even more scary and uglier, the skin is blurred it seems. Mar 09 10 11:33 pm Link Magicalla Worx wrote: uhhh how do you do D&B? I know the tools but what do I do? yes I did high pass.... Mar 09 10 11:36 pm Link Dylan White wrote: You can read it and follow up here: Mar 09 10 11:45 pm Link i would recommend you to use some sharpening on the edited image. i am not so sure since i had to switch but to me it seems you generally lost some sharpeness in the edited work compared to the original image. and as it has already been suggested dodge and burn is probably getting you better results. if you cant get anything out of the tutorials linked write me a message and i can quickly show you via desktop sharing on skype, since i will probably working most of the time today and tomorrow on retouches ![]() Mar 10 10 10:14 am Link Mourn wrote: Not at all. You sharpen your images? I would never do that, only specific areas need be sharpened like eyes. Mar 10 10 11:16 am Link Magicalla Worx wrote: In my opinion different areas need different amount of sharpening, like some parts do not need sharpening at all, which is correct, i should have been more specific about it. looking at the image of the OP i still think some more sharpness especially on the hair eyes and the contures of the clothing would improve the image, but that is just my 2 cents. Magicalla Worx wrote: is that question directed to the OP or me? Since you did quote me before i am kinda confused about this now. Mar 10 10 12:10 pm Link Mourn wrote: Most areas do not need no sharpening actually unless its eyes/fabric/minute details/somtimes hair though not too much on it. Mourn wrote: It reads your name above continued, obviously it was directed to you; if it were not for you, I would mention the OP. I saw this and commented: Mar 10 10 12:32 pm Link Magicalla Worx wrote: I do not use portraiture nor any other plug in. basic clean up with clone stamp and healing tool and then i used some degrunge to smooth out the tones. after that its dodge and burn and a lot of sharpening in the end (which i myself actually like, but i guess it wont hurt to make different versions without sharpening and look closer at the images next time to see if that is actually an improvement of if i should reduce the sharpening) Mar 10 10 12:53 pm Link |