Please critque my portfolio

You look good.  However if you're looking for weak pics, the "50's doll" and "bike headshot" could go.  Other than that, nice work.

Paul

Thanks Paul for the help

The hotel lobby shots are nice.

The shot on the bicycle could be nicer if you were not aware of the camera.

You need more commercial lifestyle shots if this represents your land-based book as well.

I like your avatar.

Here is a link from newmodel.com with tips on portfolio images for commercial print.

Going across then down,

1, 2, 9, 17, & 20 are your strongest shots.

I think the rest should be scrapped...  They look like Halloween costumes & they look very amateur.

For example... #20, your strongest shot of all, IMHO is light years ahead of #4.  It makes #4 look like a big joke! 

Whoever shot #20 needs to shoot more of you.

I looked at the website link. Thanks for your help.