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Retoucher

SO_Retouch

Posts: 143

London, England, United Kingdom

Ok thought I'd show since I realllly don't know what's wrong with me / it or the world :p ...

I'm still finding my feet fashion illustration wise and how to go about creating my images to a more editorial style.

I just don't know if it looks like a professional fashion illustration...

https://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af75/Sandy_1987/whoknows.jpg

Apr 28 10 04:37 pm Link

Retoucher

SO_Retouch

Posts: 143

London, England, United Kingdom

That bad? big_smile


haha

Apr 28 10 06:38 pm Link

Digital Artist

Eithne Ni Anluain

Posts: 1424

Dundalk, Louth, Ireland

well I've been away, only back so bear with me

I don't like the way the face and body blend. Just personally I'd be inclined to separate the textures for that.

Otherwise I love your work, tried to do it a while ago, have no patience for it so go for it pet. If people don't like it BUT have valid points as to why, use them for the good. if they are just being bitchy coz their jealous or whatever thats their problem not yours.

Apr 30 10 06:39 am Link

Photographer

nwprophoto

Posts: 15005

Tonasket, Washington, US

The black texture on the torso?

Apr 30 10 10:51 am Link