same about not being able to see the face.
I'd probably retouch the bags under her eyes too.

yep, agreed with the colors. doesn't seem that they flow together very easily.  I'd soften the entire thing along with the skin and maybe crop down a little on this one too, then do some selective masking to add some drama to this image and make it look more like she's gazing down vs. caught on an awkward pose perhaps.

If you don't mind, I'd be happy to take a shot at a re-touch on this one and its yours as long as you credit me. Had a cool idea for the drama part.  if not thats cool too either way.  goodluck