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Kane

Posts: 1647

London, England, United Kingdom

Hi all.  I've been working on my retouching and I'm hoping some of you out there can offer any suggestions as to how this could be better.  There's just something just not quite right.  Please be nit-picky and harsh, I'd really like to improve.

Going to bed now, but I'll check back in the AM to rework it some more.

Thanks

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100522/01/4bf7923c4ea8b.jpg


Edit: Skin tone perhaps?

May 22 10 01:17 am Link

Photographer

Albertus Magnus

Posts: 709

Los Angeles, California, US

I think the eyes on the post version are a bit too bright

May 22 10 01:26 am Link

Photographer

digital Artform

Posts: 49326

Los Angeles, California, US

Albertus Magnus  wrote:
I think the eyes on the post version are a bit too bright

+1

and too flat. eyes are spheres.

May 22 10 01:36 am Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 8908

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Variant Design wrote:
Hi all.  I've been working on my retouching and I'm hoping some of you out there can offer any suggestions as to how this could be better.  There's just something just not quite right.  Please be nit-picky and harsh, I'd really like to improve.

Going to bed now, but I'll check back in the AM to rework it some more.

Thanks

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100522/01/4bf7923c4ea8b.jpg


Edit: Skin tone perhaps?

I like the before better.......

May 22 10 01:43 am Link

Retoucher

J Strath

Posts: 928

Los Angeles, California, US

You've completely removed the bottom eyelid.  It instantly makes the image look unnatural.  There is a difference between eyelids and dark circles.  Also, you made the color of her skin very unnatural.  I think you're changing things that don't need to be changed.  You're doing too much.

May 22 10 05:41 am Link

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