Trancedelic Retouching wrote:
All three....old version, new version, and original version all look the same to me?  Not sure what you did.  Anyway, they all look good though at least. XD

From what I recall, between the old version and new version:  liquify right cheek and brought it in abit, liquify breast, liquify back and liquify left side of hair, increase brightness of the skin, dodge shoulder and arm, D&B shadow along right cheek, burn left cheekbones, clean up eyes and add more eyelashes and sharpen various features.

David Tom wrote:

From what I recall, between the old version and new version:  liquify right cheek and brought it in abit, liquify breast, liquify back and liquify left side of hair, increase brightness of the skin, dodge shoulder and arm, D&B shadow along right cheek, burn left cheekbones, clean up eyes and add more eyelashes and sharpen various features.

very nice!  It's very subtle, that's for sure!  I like it, the original didn't really require much work, if any at all, so it looks really good in my opinion.

Ronnie_Smith wrote:
There is no right or wrong! Just edit the way YOU like to edit. All the changes I see have been minor and do not take away from the original which stands up well on its own.

Just for fun you could try a little more "impact" editing and see if you get something you might like.

+1

Maybe you can do some D&B to sculpt the face to bring out the structure?  Here's an attempt/ example below.  It's only D&B.  I didn't liquify the cheek, because I thought it was a good spot to bring in some reflected light.   Overall, I think it looks great just in it's original state, you don't have to edit it at all if you didn't want to. XD