Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

Earthspirit

Posts: 189

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

I only have a few images I like scanned from my film days (been out of the game for a while).  I do mainly fine art these days but I do like fashion.

So...what do you think? :-)

Feb 07 14 01:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

John Alan Photography wrote:
I'm in, just updated mine 2/2/2014

I would say yes. The lighting and color scheme is nice and I like the outfit/style of the model. Decent posing as well but the expression looks quizzical.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130712/12/51e0562beccee_m.jpg

Possibly:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131120/19/528d8264438a9_m.jpg

Feb 07 14 07:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Thornwood Street Studio wrote:
Ok, whenever you get to it, let me know.  thanks,

Yes. Overall I like the shot. I think the skin could be smoother though. But hair and makeup is really nice and the outfit/jewelry is nice. Pose is pretty good but expression is a little blank

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120124/16/4f1f499e935d9_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140204/17/52f190dfdb8e8_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34773190 18+

Feb 07 14 08:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

ESweet wrote:
I would really appreciate a critique via a private message. I can't find my name in the forum search box, so I may not be able to find this post again. Thanks wink

I would say maybe. The quality of the image could be better but I think you have a decent look. I like the outfit you have on and looks like you have an okay figure as well- your posing is good for the most part.. Just don't like the placement of your hand-- and that it looks so disproportionately large in the image. Your expression should also be more engaged.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130807/14/5202bef483095_m.jpg

Feb 09 14 08:25 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Henry Westheim wrote:
I'd like to know.  Thanks!

Yes, even though I don't love the background, the image itself is decent. Very cute model, and I like her hair a lot, as well as her joyful expression. The posing could be better though and I don't like the over sized shirt she's wearing- The skirt, though is nice.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140125/07/52e3dd7124b0f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140124/06/52e27d5dbeb32_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130727/04/51f3ae1d80a99_m.jpg

Feb 09 14 10:01 pm Link

Photographer

Michael R Photography

Posts: 34

Los Angeles, California, US

Ahhh im scared...what do you think? ;P

Feb 09 14 10:08 pm Link

Photographer

Henry Westheim

Posts: 658

Taichung City, Taichung City, Taiwan

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes, even though I don't love the background, the image itself is decent. Very cute model, and I like her hair a lot, as well as her joyful expression. The posing could be better though and I don't like the over sized shirt she's wearing- The skirt, though is nice.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140125/07/52e3dd7124b0f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140124/06/52e27d5dbeb32_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130727/04/51f3ae1d80a99_m.jpg

big_smile  Thanks for your critique.  Cheers!

Feb 09 14 11:54 pm Link

Model

Sash

Posts: 1

Venice, California, US

Can't wait to hear it...

Feb 10 14 12:02 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Angie Marie wrote:
Would love to know

I would say maybe- The lower part of your body looks disproportionately larger but I like your style especially the top and panties paired with those chunky heels- Would almost prefer not to have the socks on though. Looks like you have a nice figure and makeup- Also like your hair color. Expression is a bit blank though.

Feb 10 14 09:06 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jojo West wrote:
How about moi?

No. This just isn't my style - the image is too dark and I really don't like the mask and really would just prefer to see how you look!  I do like the corset though- pink is one of my favorite colors.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131014/07/525bf9402240c_m.jpg

Feb 10 14 07:01 pm Link

Photographer

Yevgeniya Fedorov

Posts: 46

Forest Hills, New York, US

I'd like to know smile

Feb 10 14 07:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

MarkGreenStudios wrote:
me ?

Probably, it's unique but in a nice way.. I like the color scheme and the model's hair style/makeup. The color and material of the dress is lovely as well. Expression is decent too.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131202/10/529cd8650b3ea_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131201/15/529bbf720619d_m.jpg

Feb 10 14 08:18 pm Link

Photographer

Nostalgia Studios

Posts: 153

Yuma, Arizona, US

I'd like to know!

Feb 10 14 08:34 pm Link

Model

Kristen Heitzmann

Posts: 29

Nelson, British Columbia, Canada

Alright give it to me!!

Feb 10 14 10:00 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Stephanie Bryant  Roe wrote:
ok :-)

Maybe. The image is a little tough to make out in the regular profile view and the ivy paired with the leaves in the background makes the image look a bit cluttered. I do like your hair, makeup and it looks like you have a nice posing going on, as well as a decent figure. Expression is quite blank though.

Feb 11 14 08:30 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

huumm wrote:
Would you ?

Yes, I really like the lighting and color scheme of this image. The outfit is lovely and looks great on the model. The model is gorgeous as well- Nice hair, facial features and makeup. Pose is okay, but don't like the left arm kind of hanging limp. Expression is pretty good.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131216/14/52af825489a6a_m.jpg

Feb 11 14 08:52 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

miss tink wrote:
I would love to play please!

I would say maybe. I like the image of you in the mirror- Also really like the styling. The black of the outfit looks really good with the pearls. Nice hair color/hair style and facial features too. Expression looks blank though.

Feb 12 14 11:39 am Link

Photographer

GNapp Studios

Posts: 6223

Somerville, New Jersey, US

Certainly.

Feb 12 14 11:41 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

R Byron Johnson wrote:
My avatar?  If you're too lazy or disinterested to click through, then why would I want to bother?

I'm not sure. I do like the light pink balloon and the bits of red in the image but don't know if I would try this concept. I think the background could be more interesting. The model's expression is pretty good though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140130/14/52ead675315b0_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35091738 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35091728 18+

Feb 12 14 09:45 pm Link

Photographer

Josh Patterson Photogra

Posts: 1

Los Angeles, California, US

Hello everyone

Feb 12 14 10:19 pm Link

Model

Mel Heflin

Posts: 279

Atlantic Beach, Florida, US

I'm game.

Feb 12 14 10:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Miguel King wrote:
Would you work with me?

Yes. I like the black and white tones of the image and the pose is well done, as is your strong expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140206/14/52f406e727e63_m.jpg

Feb 13 14 10:13 am Link

Model

Eric Slodysko

Posts: 50

COAL TOWNSHIP, Pennsylvania, US

I'd like to know.

Feb 13 14 12:33 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jacey Calloway wrote:
meow! interested!

Yes. Very high fashion and beautiful look. I like the outfit and head piece- On someone else it may be too much, but you carry it well. I also really like your hair color, eyes and other facial features- Lovely makeup too. Expression looks a little sleepy though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140203/12/52eff777c9cb1_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/21/50dbdddf584f3_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110111/20/4d2d28997cd13_m.jpg

Feb 13 14 12:50 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

VenomousBombshell wrote:
Well..would you?

No. The image a bit too blurry and I don't love the green color scheme. Your expression is very sleepy/blank- almost cross eyed which isn't attractive. You do have nice hair and eye color though.

Nice:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35167573 18+

Feb 13 14 01:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Earthspirit wrote:
I only have a few images I like scanned from my film days (been out of the game for a while).  I do mainly fine art these days but I do like fashion.

So...what do you think? :-)

No. This is just not really my style- I don't like the grittiness of the image and the pose is strange and the expression disconcerting.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140107/10/52cc4a7e1c912_m.jpg

Feb 13 14 05:58 pm Link

Photographer

Earthspirit

Posts: 189

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

winking_wonder wrote:

No. This is just not really my style- I don't like the grittiness of the image and the pose is strange and the expression disconcerting.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140107/10/52cc4a7e1c912_m.jpg

Thanks. Always good to get an 'independent' opinion from someone who knows what they are talking about. I guess I have always really seen that image (my avatar) as a portrait anyway. The woman is a very fierce person...which is reflected in her expression :-) .

Glad you liked something anyway... I need to do some new work, which is why I joined. Cheers!

Feb 14 14 10:32 am Link

Photographer

DJR Pictures

Posts: 96

Plaistow, New Hampshire, US

Guess I'll give it a whirl...

Feb 14 14 10:37 am Link

Photographer

CireStudios

Posts: 223

New York, New York, US

I'm in.

Feb 14 14 10:43 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Michael R Photography wrote:
Ahhh im scared...what do you think? ;P

Yes. I like the black and white tones and the lighting is superb. Nice texture on the model's skin and very lovely lingerie and sexy cleavage. The expression is quite emotive as well. I just don't like the cigarette.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140106/13/52cb270789515_m.jpg

Feb 14 14 01:59 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Henry Westheim wrote:

big_smile  Thanks for your critique.  Cheers!

No problem!

Feb 15 14 07:21 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Earthspirit wrote:

Thanks. Always good to get an 'independent' opinion from someone who knows what they are talking about. I guess I have always really seen that image (my avatar) as a portrait anyway. The woman is a very fierce person...which is reflected in her expression :-) .

Glad you liked something anyway... I need to do some new work, which is why I joined. Cheers!

Yes, it's definitely an interesting portrait. Wish you the best of luck in adding new work!

Feb 15 14 09:25 pm Link

Photographer

Denis Rule

Posts: 189

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

I'm game, are you?

Feb 15 14 09:39 pm Link

Photographer

Michael R Photography

Posts: 34

Los Angeles, California, US

Thank you for your opinion! I appreciate everything you said! smile

Feb 16 14 02:02 am Link

Retoucher

PixelMixer

Posts: 21

Nashville, Tennessee, US

I like the concept... When I'm looking for models, I always begin with the Avatar.  If it does not grab me for whatever I'm seeking, I move on or come back later if all other options don't feed my need.

winking_wonder wrote:
Simply what the subject states. If no, I might let you know which photo I like better (if any).

Open to everyone: Photographers, models, MUA, retouchers etc


Note: It may take a few days, but I *will* get to you.

Feb 16 14 05:48 am Link

Model

Misty Autery

Posts: 128

Orlando, Florida, US

I wanna play!!! big_smile

Feb 16 14 05:53 am Link

Photographer

Niel Galen

Posts: 10

New Brunswick, New Jersey, US

Sure.  Curious. smile

Feb 16 14 06:15 am Link

Model

Official_Cat

Posts: 1831

Milan, Lombardy, Italy

now?

Feb 16 14 06:34 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Sash wrote:
Can't wait to hear it...

Yes. I like the way you're positioned in the image and that formfitting black dress looks really good on you- It shows off your figure well. You've also got a great pose going. Your hair and makeup looks really nice, but expression is not the best.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140209/23/52f883ee0971f_m.jpg

Feb 16 14 09:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Yevgeniya Fedorov wrote:
I'd like to know smile

Yes. I like the soft lighting and the smooth finish of the image. Pretty model and the image showcases her lovely features, hair and makeup. Expression could be more engaging though.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110914/21/4e7181a0bc2f5_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130304/15/5135357ea6838_m.jpg

Feb 16 14 10:44 pm Link