I have recently gotten back into modeling and have posted some new photographs. What do you think? I am more then happy to reply to any comments (on thread or photographs) with feedback. Oct 06 12 07:27 pm Link bump Oct 06 12 07:48 pm Link bump Oct 06 12 09:07 pm Link I'll just describe my reaction to opening your port - first it was a WTF!? and a bit of a heart thump, then it was laughter and then just a head shake with disbelief and some sadness. I also wonder where you were locked up during your absence from MM. Funny you have some degree of warmth and pleasantness in your avatar shot which is a great set up for the disturbing and pitiful photos inside. It might not be what you hoped for but its honest and I have been looking a portfolios all day and this one had the greatest impact. Just wish I hadnt done it as I was about to go to bed Any way hang in there- pun intended Oct 06 12 09:22 pm Link duplicate Oct 06 12 09:22 pm Link Mark wrote: Thank you very much for your feed back Oct 06 12 09:25 pm Link You might want to think about adding something a bit lighter in tone. Jus my thought YMMV Oct 06 12 09:31 pm Link NewBoldPhoto wrote: Thank you, I shall try and get some lighter images Oct 06 12 09:34 pm Link If that's the kind of work you like and want to be known for, then I think many of the images are quite good. However, ... I would lose the first one on the first row because the second one is better and you don't need two similar ones. On the second row I would lose at least one, and probably both of the last two. The lighting is flat and uninteresting and the headpiece does nothing good for you. On the third row I would lose the second from the left. It doesn't really say anything except that somebody naked is under a dressing table. You have three shots from a wrecked, abandoned building. The strongest is the final one where you are leaning against the wall. I would abandon the other two. Finally,I would lose the final image. In fact, that's the first I would lose, if culling. Oct 06 12 09:56 pm Link WCR3 wrote: Thank you very much that was very helpful Oct 06 12 10:16 pm Link bump Oct 06 12 11:21 pm Link bump Oct 07 12 04:54 pm Link one last bump Oct 08 12 01:42 am Link i think you've got a great figure, but i dont think your portfolio is living up to your potential. surely you've seen better rope bondage photos, and better art nudes. what's holding you back? 18+ http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mb6v7 … o1_500.jpg this is better than the shots you've got on your mm page, in my opinion. Oct 08 12 02:54 am Link what i assume to be the new images are very dark and need to be brighter. i mean as far as lighting goes, not mood. Some of your what i assume are older photos have terrible framing and should be deleted immediately. ex. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 1#29994981 18+ Oct 09 12 03:46 am Link I love the shots on your bottom row. Would shoot with that model in a heartbeat. Oct 09 12 04:01 am Link Oct 09 12 04:52 am Link |