_eMMe_ wrote:
I'll be glad to receive any tips!

My least favourite of your images is your display picture. It makes your hair look fake... Not a fan of that!

You look MUCH better in pictures such as this one:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27723644
Softness and light in photos are definitely your strong suite, so I'd suggest doing more of that.

You also have an amazing body if you pursue nudes/implied.

Rachael R wrote:
You still critiquing?
Have a snoop...what d'ya think?

Thanks!

Still going, yes!

Your runway images are fantastic!

You also have a skill for posing. I love this photo:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30004088

If anything, I'd get rid of this one:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28445501
Not the best photography wise, and it's just mediocre. Your portfolio should only include your best images. This isn't one of them.

You seem to be quite successful! Congratulations and I hope you continue!

RachelKahn wrote:
Would love to know what to cut out and replace with any of the pictures at this link:

https://plus.google.com/photos/11801454 … 16_S79upBw

(I'm trying to completely revamp my portfolio, something I haven't done in a year)

Well, I'm officially a fan of your work! Beautiful!


I'd take out these:
https://plus.google.com/photos/11801454 … 4990596962
https://plus.google.com/photos/11801454 … 4029434546
https://plus.google.com/photos/11801454 … 9087438642
They do nothing but bring down the overall look of your portfolio, as all of the other images are stunning.

Maria Susanti wrote:
still doing this? me please

You have a beautifully exotic look!

Honestly, I love all of your photos and wouldn't suggest you delete any. All I can say is try to have more interaction with the camera, and not be afraid to look right in to it and be flirty with it.

byyang wrote:
I'm fairly new to all this, and would love your opinion

I would never guess you were fairly new!

I'd suggest deleting this one:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30642372
It looks like you're picking at your crotch and isn't as great as the rest of your photos.

My favourite of you is this one:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31730478
It shows your natural beauty. I'd suggest you make it your display picture.

Axioma wrote:

You're fantastic.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28585911
Is definitely your best shot.

I'd suggest deleting this:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26167488
It's beautiful but a bad photo compaired to the rest of yours.

Sibby S wrote:
me please

I think you should do more outdoor shoots, you look beautiful in that kind of setting. And try and to more shots where you're looking AWAY from the camera.

I'd suggest you delete this one:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31731778
It looks as if you're sucking in your cheeks and gives it an awkward look.

But you're very beautiful and have plenty more potential!

Celine Sophia wrote:
still building my port, how is it so far and what should I add?

You definitely need to get some conceptual shots in your portfolio to show your versatility, but you're definitely doing great so far! You have a very pretty and fresh look!

jmr75 wrote:
Go for it! Your precious time is highly appreciated.

The lighting in your photos aren't the best, which means it doesn't show your features well. Try working with some new and better photographers to achieve this.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32242454
You look cute and innocent in this picture which works well for you.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32242470
You look good here, but once again the quality is lacking.

You should try and get more indoor shots in your portfolio.

Tahlia Rae wrote:
Sure

Your posing is really amazing and your portfolio shows a lot of versatility!

You do have quite a few pictures from the same look, and you should really cut down to just one or two, no more.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30790861
This is really great, though the arm that's hanging looks really stiff and board-like.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 1#32252717
Beautiful face and wonderful pose, but they don't go together.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30790902
You pulled off the creepy but beautiful look very well!

AngelicaDemonica wrote:
Alright, give me a shot. I want to see what you think. I kept a special section for 'old photos' so people could see how I have evolved and changed as a model. Please let me know what you think.

Note: A lot of my port is erotic/fetish work, as that's what I primarily do. Let me know what you think.

No problem with critiquing erotic/fetish!

The first thing I noticed was that the lack of styling with your hair tends to bring down the overall images in your port, and when it's fully straightened it looks much, much better.

Your erotic work tends to be much better than your simple nudes.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30790902
Is a VERY powerful and great shot. Your body looks terrific!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18981114
This is both beautiful and sexy, which is a wonderful combination you achieved.

AngelicaDemonica wrote:
I think you linked the wrong picture for the first one? Where you mentioned my body? As for the second, I do appreciate the comment.

When it comes down to my work, most of the time I have to style my hair myself and do my own makeup.

I have very... particular hair. It doesn't hold curls or straightening for long, without massive styling products. My hair is REALLY REALLY fine, and there is A LOT of it. I keep it long, because I do not like having short hair.

My hair also changes in it's style, based on how recently I have washed it. If I am doing a shoot the day after I wash my hair, no matter how much I brush it, it will always have wave/curl to the bottom of my hair. The longer I go between washing/conditioning... the straighter it is.

I'm sorry, I mixed the two links up!

AngelicaDemonica wrote:
It's ok! Which ones were the ones you liked?

Both. I loved your body and the way it was formed in the picture with your hands tied behind your back. And I loved the pretty/creepy beauty of the face paint one.

Ashley Alexiss wrote:
Still going?

Of course!

You definitely have the beautiful, curvy, sexy girl next door type of look going for you.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30084529
I love this picture because of your face and the styling, but the hands just remind me of "jazz hands" and that kinda ruined it for me.


https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30084408
You look so pretty here.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22192400
And you definitely have a beautiful variation of facial expressions!

Though I can't picture you ever doing high fashion (which maybe you don't even want to do) you definitely have lots more potential in you!

Holly Summers wrote:
I'm game!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30771802
Your body is FANTASTIC. Wonderful image!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31521467
I really don't like this picture. It makes you look old.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29137316
This is pretty intense and beautiful!

You can pull off both pretty and sexy, which is great!

Sharkie Mac wrote:
I would appreciate your opinion please

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30464089
I don't like this one much. You look intoxicated and like you're drowning in balloons.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31540298
This is simply beautiful.

I definitely prefer your conceptual work. You need to practice better eye-contact with the camera because that's the biggest thing I noticed.

Alicia Shank wrote:
Count me in! I am aware my port has only 3 outfits & am working on that now But id love to hear what you have to say about my look, facial expressions, & posing

THanks !

Your look really drew me in! You have plenty of potential! The photographer you worked with on the first row of images in your port is spectacular, and you two did great work together.

You need to find a few more facial expressions that can work with posing, because open-mouthed, smile, and sly smile can only get you so far!

You could definitely do some really cool beauty/glamour shots.

Try and create shapes with your body instead of pose.

You're definitely doing great so far