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Photographer

VOLUME - Photography

Posts: 19

London, England, United Kingdom

Hello all,

I am trying to develop a rich & colourful pin-up style - here is my latest effort
  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32312313

Interested in your first impressions.

Thanks in advance

Apr 15 13 11:40 am Link

Photographer

AJ_In_Atlanta

Posts: 13053

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Maybe I am missing something in the translation but pinup has a totally different feel then what you are showing.

The model looks good, I would take care of a crease or two on her

Apr 15 13 11:49 am Link

Artist/Painter

Totally ADHD

Posts: 1

Somerville, New Jersey, US

Of your work this one is closer to pinup style
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27788884

Apr 15 13 05:31 pm Link

Retoucher

Alexander Retouch

Posts: 115

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

I like the execution of this, but I don't think Pin-Up when I see it.  I see a Quentin Tarantino movie poster.  Or an old time movie poster like this:

http://www.cinemasterpieces.com/attack50mar06.jpg

Great work though!

May 02 13 07:21 am Link