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Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Added photos from 2 shoots I did in the pass 2 weeks. Would like to know what you think of them, if any work for my port, or if I completely failed (haha). Also would like opinions on the port in general (new and old photos)

Apr 24 13 09:49 am Link

Photographer

Trisha May Photography

Posts: 308

Colchester, Connecticut, US

They look alright, smile I'm diggin your red hair!

Apr 24 13 06:47 pm Link

Photographer

Marin Photo NYC

Posts: 7348

New York, New York, US

I don't like the two with the white background. They make you look short. The first one in the second row, just does nothing for me really.

The others are good, not anything to write home about but well done!

I like this one best....

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130422/13/51759ad139a1c_m.jpg

it makes you look sexy! good expression and well done shot. Not crazy about the pose but it's not bad.

Just from my noob experience, make yourself taller and look longer. Tippie toe, stretch out your legs, try not to squish yourself up...point your toes, get high heels in anytime you can haha....

Apr 24 13 06:55 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Marin Photography wrote:
I don't like the two with the white background. They make you look short. The first one in the second row, just does nothing for me really.

The others are good, not anything to write home about but well done!

I like this one best....

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130422/13/51759ad139a1c_m.jpg

it makes you look sexy! good expression and well done shot. Not crazy about the pose but it's not bad.

Just from my noob experience, make yourself taller and look longer. Tippie toe, stretch out your legs, try not to squish yourself up...point your toes, get high heels in anytime you can haha....

Thanks for the advice. I actually wear heels mostly during shoots, just didn't post many where I was wearing heels. I'll try to remember to make myself look taller.

Apr 25 13 04:50 am Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Anyone else?

Apr 26 13 01:04 am Link

Photographer

GNapp Studios

Posts: 6223

Somerville, New Jersey, US

This is the only one I would keep in my port.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130424/09/517801d1baac0_m.jpg

The shot on the motorcycle should have been done with a faster lens and the motorcycle further away from the trees to blur out the background and focus the shot on you.

The shots with the white background are uninteresting.

That being said, you have a wonderful look and a great figure and the rest of your port highlights it much better.

Apr 26 13 01:14 am Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

You're the 2nd person to say they don't really care for the white background shots. I'm debating taking them down though.

Apr 26 13 11:04 pm Link