Hey all would love some Critiques

Not really much to pick on really.

  The skin is a little too perfect. Aside from that, I think you are off to a good start anyway...

Perhaps you could give a little more information about yourself or your goals in your bio - it seems very uninformative.

As for your actual work - get more of it. The pictures are alright, perhaps do a little bit less post-editing. They all seem over done to me. Otherwise, your portfolio doesn't really make sense. The style of photography you are going for is very unclear and you don't have enough of any one genre to really see how good you are.