Jacob in Japan wrote:
Fantastic work!

You might want to consider muting the contrast and saturation slightly to get even closer to a an unretouched look. Probably should take down some of the sharpness too~

Thank you sir and here is a version with the contrast/sat down slightly and less sharpening.

Matt Letharian wrote:
You should work more on her forehead. You removed neck line and in my opinion now it looks unnatural.

I had tried to leave the line on neck several times before i posted it but it looked too distracting to me so I removed it, her necking isn't turning all that much.  But I did clean the forehead a tiny bit.

Thanks for your comments : )