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Retoucher

SaintPix

Posts: 6

Vilnius, Vilniaus, Lithuania

Hello, I would like to present my last created photo manipulation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=conAuPp_cq0   I spend on this picture about 10 hours. I hope you like it. Have a nice watching.

May 26 16 10:03 pm Link

Digital Artist

Joe Diamond

Posts: 415

Bucharest, Bucharest, Romania

The color blending its good, the water looks copy pasted tho, the girl cannot be seen very well to judge. If you are looking for believable, realistic composition best is to learn from life, lights, shadows, reflections and color blending.

May 28 16 10:52 am Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 7087

Lodi, California, US

I couldn't watch the whole thing just to see end image, l would be happy to view
finished work to judge it, but please don't ask for critique of speed video.

May 28 16 03:02 pm Link

Retoucher

Traciee D

Posts: 446

Lafayette, Louisiana, US

I can tell you are passionate about what you are doing so good job and kudos.  You have a vision and you are doing a great job with the end results.  I would suggest when doing videos like that to speed them up some so you don't lose your targeted audience.  Keep going at it you are doing a great job.

much love,
Traciee D

Jul 07 16 07:33 pm Link