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Model

ChristineWu

Posts: 1

Los Angeles, California, US

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Jul 07 16 11:48 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3721

Walnut Creek, California, US

You show a wide variety of emotions.  That is good.

Many of the images are out of focus.  That is not good.

But just one worthless opinion.

smile

Jul 08 16 11:17 am Link

Photographer

Kris Krieg

Posts: 1341

Missoula, Montana, US

I see that you have two profiles. Is this a deliberate choice…are you using one profile to emphasize a particular type of work? If so, I'm not understanding the distinction. You might want to consider defining the two profiles with specific genres. For example, the "poshtash" profile might be artistic nudes and the "ChristineLiu" profile would focus on acting or fashion/lifestyle shots. These shots seem a bit out of place with your artistic nude work.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160706/06/577d0c0490158_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160707/23/577f4dab31522_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160705/22/577c9320251ce_m.jpg

You might consider organizing your work a bit. You could create folders to contain specific genres. Just seems a little scattered to me.

In your other critique post, you ask for feedback on good and bad. Overall, you are showing a dynamic range of emotions. I only see a couple shots that are out of focus.  I can't really say that I dislike any of them. There are a few average shots, but here are the ones that I find to stand out. The first is my personal favorite.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160501/17/57269e39def8b_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/151205/17/56638a9396703_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160705/22/577c92d6d27a0_m.jpg
18 + https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39768383
18 + https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39766634

The only one that I feel could be removed is this one. Just doesn't say much to me.
18 + https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39855258

Looks like you are having fun with photography. Keep at it.

Jul 08 16 10:28 pm Link