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SavageBeautyPortraits

Posts: 82

Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand

I have some new images...which is the weakest and strongest image?
Much appreciated.

Cheers

Ant

Sep 06 16 08:38 pm Link

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Thomas Van Dyke

Posts: 3232

Washington, District of Columbia, US

SavageBeautyPhotography wrote:
I have some new images...which is the weakest and strongest image?
Much appreciated.

Cheers

Ant

Ant this rendering has intriguing compositional elements...
The white ensemble contrasts nicely against the muted sylvan venue...

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150115/12/54b829959bf9d.jpg

The dynamic motion adds a perfect touch of drama to an otherwise static scene...
Delightful synergy latent within...

Have you considered cropping a tad off camera right?

Oct 08 16 11:26 am Link

Photographer

SavageBeautyPortraits

Posts: 82

Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand

Have you considered cropping a tad off camera right?


Thanks Thomas...I had not considered it but now you mention it...you think cut off from the first clump of trees? on extreme right just before the main tree? thanks again. Ant

Oct 10 16 02:40 pm Link

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thiswayup

Posts: 1136

Runcorn, England, United Kingdom

I'd say the crop is perfect. What is bringing the picture down from its full (very high) potential is the way the model's hair merges tonally with the background - should be easy to correct.

Oct 16 16 08:36 am Link