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Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Hi everyone,
So I have been getting more clients lately and here are the results of 3 paid shoots.  These are the client selections.  Let me know what you think of them, the quality, if they are port worthy, etc.  All the feedback from here has helped me grow a ton so I'm looking to continue down that path.  Thanks in advance!

NUMBER 1
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_2727-Edit%20Internet_zpsszsbtzcq.png

NUMBER 2
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_2792-Edit%20Internet_zpsz5bsculr.png

NUMBER 3
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_2560-EditInternet_zpsa49kxkjl.png

NUMBER 4
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_3229-Edit%20Internet_zpsjlmynwun.png

NUMBER 5
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_3312-Edit%20Internet_zpsonrnxm94.png

Mar 11 17 06:10 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

My view point on a few of your new images

Photo 1
Model and body quite square to camera, with that much arm would love to see models left hand too.
In background would like to see a tighter crop photo right, so wall is against photo border, like a rat in a maze my eyes are drawn to that high contrast area

Photo 2
Model is square to camera
Think I might like this a bit more, with a tighter crop photo right and left [The why, you cropped the top of her head a bit, so would like a tighter crop overall.]

Photo 3
This just feels right, great smile, solid eye connection with camera

Photo 4
Great eye contact with camera
[Wish all of models right elbow were in photo]

Photo 5
This is just a fun image, really enjoy looking at it
[That is I stopped to look at the image instead of just moving onto the next photo.]
Time for a giant wrapped wall art print

Think you did a great job of capturing your clients

I wish you well

Mar 12 17 04:20 pm Link

Photographer

PhotoRealism

Posts: 186

Dallas, Texas, US

You did a great job with the lighting on these. Photos 4 and 5 are exceptional, although, as has been noted above, I would like to see the elbow inside the frame.

Photo 3 is a nicely composed high key portrait....I'm not personally a big fan of white background, high key portraits, but you did a good job with the style -- on photo 3, I might have used a snoot flash on the back of the subject's shoulders and hair, to make him look less pasted onto a white board.

Photo 2 is a nice tight head shot. I might have framed it a little tighter on the left side (bringing the edge of the photo to her shoulder), but that is personal preference only.

Photo 1 is well-lit....I would have either widened the frame to include her hand, hips, and hair, or I would have framed it tighter to cut off the blue jeans and include her hair. Cutting hair out of the frame looks better to me personally when it is a tight head shot where a lot of other stuff is out-of-frame as well.

Really great work, and congrats on getting more clients. Your photos should make them very happy.

Mar 13 17 07:41 am Link