Forums > Critique > Please guys... help give a step forward

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MiguelA castilla

Posts: 1

New York, New York, US

Mar 30 17 10:49 pm Link

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Mark Salo

Posts: 11726

Olney, Maryland, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170323/11/58d4197ca2642_m.jpg

The image is overexposed.  Her skin is too light and the white costume is blown out.  Your camera auto exposure adjusted to make the dark background lighter.

Mar 31 17 07:15 am Link

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Wandering Eyebubble

Posts: 323

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I think that, technically, Miguel knows exactly what he is doing. I'm not sure then what he is looking for. Inspiration?

Edit: I like the photo, wish I could see the entirety of the model.

Mar 31 17 07:44 am Link

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sospix

Posts: 23773

Orlando, Florida, US

I think the only visual update I might do to the image is to make her a bit less centered, if you tightened the crop on the right side, it may give the image a little more energy  .  .  .  nicely done  .  .  .

SOS

Mar 31 17 08:18 am Link

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Connor Photography

Posts: 8539

Newark, Delaware, US

I don't find the image is overexposed at all.  Like other said, play with the crop more, let the model pops.

Mar 31 17 12:13 pm Link