Photographer

pclind

Posts: 3

Los Angeles, California, US

Hello MM people!

Would you guys help me select the top 3 best photos from my profile?
Would love some hardcore feedback!

Jun 29 17 03:05 pm Link

Photographer

Jacob Konst

Posts: 414

Tucson, Arizona, US

In my opinion these are your 3 strongest images.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170613/13/59404594e6050.jpg
If you took this shot when the sun was at a lower angle the light would have played nicely with the ripples in the water, as it stands it's a bit muted but you might be able to pull out some nice ridges using burn and dodge. Also her stripped shirt is a bit distracting given the background. Maybe a solid color/white shirt would be a stronger choice.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170629/14/59556f814554c.jpg
Simple and beautiful. The light, the color the framing, it's all wonderful.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170629/14/59556cb47c06a.jpg
I love the light but the DoF blurs the foreground hand a bit too much. Pull it back slightly and you are golden. Right now her hand blends into her shoulder too much.

Jul 06 17 01:01 pm Link

Photographer

pclind

Posts: 3

Los Angeles, California, US

Thanks Jacob! Much appreciated smile

Jul 06 17 10:10 pm Link

Photographer

E H

Posts: 847

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42668797

This is your best, good lighting, eyes are lit, not centered, good background and good crop.


https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41974687

The only thing I don't like about this is the crop needs to come up a little to get rid of the floaty head thing. This image should be centered, it holds a lot of power.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42668790

good lighting, eyes are lit (it could be a bit big so it is easy to catch the veiwer), not centered, good background and good crop.

Should look into and study images, there are reasons why images are better or worse,, waay tooo much to explain here,,, should be able to do this yourself, take a lot of research and time but then you know.

That my 2 cents

Jul 07 17 04:02 pm Link