Evening folks,

I would appreciate some critique on my portfolio. I'm trying to get to a stage of shooting high end fashion/portraiture and commercials for high end clients. I've just updated my MM portfolio and in need of some serious critique - mainly what are my images lacking? Do they exude enough qualities to attract top paying clients? etc etc.

Thanks a lot guys.

All of your images look very "static". There is no movement, implied or implicit.

Fashion photography is narrative, there is more than a model, an outfit, some props and a pose.

You have good technicals but try to put some life in your work.

My first and best advice would be to get outside while the weather is nice and shoot some motion studies.