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Been modeling for fun for 5 years. Please give any honest feedback that I could work on. Thanks~ Nov 26 18 02:38 pm Link Hi e-wen, You want to work with better photographers. It may be helpful to clean up your port a bit so I've done some selecting for you. I hope this helps! Cheers, Michael These are your best images, keep them. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44855650 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44855645 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44852333 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44708172 - it's more or less a snapshot but you have a great smile. Keep it for now. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44705704 - this is nice but could be improved. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44009236 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/43771806 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/43771803 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/43771670 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42924661 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42924653 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42447513 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42447494 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42447484 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42429595 - one of your best, a bit stiff but nice expression https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42016697 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41900792 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41250588 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38635265 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38635229 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38436795 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38374440 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38374364 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38134200 The pose is awkward and does not show you at your best. Close but you want better. If you keep these, replace with a better one when you can. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42924663 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42447510 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42429581 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40262212 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38577733 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38134176 These images have repeated expressions, you have a lovely smile and other nice faces you can make. So many of your images you look as though you are unhappy. I recommend that you delete them. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44855634 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44855631 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44852337 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44852332 These images have cropped of your hands/feet/etc. in awkward ways. I would recommend you delete them. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44855640 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/43771716 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40891430 These images are very dark. I would recommend you delete them. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44852338 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44852336 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44852335 These images don't show you well, we don't know that it is you in the picture. I would recommend that you delete them. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44739470 (also, the ocean never slants - relatively minor detail) https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44739464 - this could have been glorious if you were recognizable and closer https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44610261 - just a turn of the head (and a level ocean) and this could have been really nice. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44610259 Nov 28 18 03:13 pm Link Shadow Dancer wrote: Hi there, thanks so much for your feedback! I agree with some being awkward, but I like the dark ones so I will probably keep them. I appreciate the time you took though! Nov 29 18 05:37 pm Link e_wen wrote: You're welcome, cheers! Dec 01 18 05:42 pm Link Your very pretty but I have to agree the dark ones are not helping your port. Dec 05 18 09:33 pm Link First, most of the images are very low quality; Second, you are showing only 2 or 3 facial expressions - you need more variety; Third, there is not enough variety in your wardrobe. The above and comments from others are mainly about the quality of the images. You need to work with more experienced photographers who can direct you in your poses. Dec 06 18 08:59 pm Link e_wen wrote: Dear Ms. e_wen: Dec 07 18 02:11 am Link |
