Forums > Critique > Whatcha think about my gel photography portfolio!

Photographer

YourzTruly Photo

Posts: 5

Dallas, Texas, US

I just uploaded a new portfolio. I would love to hear everyone’s feedback. Please go comment or respond on this thread!

Aug 09 19 06:24 am Link

Photographer

Fist Full of Ish

Posts: 2301

Aiken, South Carolina, US

Sure.  Some pieces look pretty good.  Just a general rule that might have improved certain pics.  Not that it's appropriate for every pic:
- The brightest part of the  pic should be in the subject, especially if the dynamic range of the background is relatively high.
The lighting in a few pics is a bit flat.
Your portfolio is heavy with gel work.  I know that's what you are asking about.   'Maybe cut some of the more flatly-lit "gel-looking" stuff.

This pic bothers me: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/190808/08/5d4c439ec17f7_m.jpg
It looks like you used a brush poorly, and it is poorly lit in the first place.
This one looks pretty good except the near eye is closed. https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/181121/08/5bf58c4777a67_m.jpg
This looks pretty good: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/190808/08/5d4c430cf1166_m.jpg

Aug 11 19 12:08 pm Link

Photographer

YourzTruly Photo

Posts: 5

Dallas, Texas, US

Thanks for the feedback. I will keep that in mind when shooting in the future.


Fist Full of Ish wrote:
Sure.  Some pieces look pretty good.  Just a general rule that might have improved certain pics.  Not that it's appropriate for every pic:
- The brightest part of the  pic should be in the subject, especially if the dynamic range of the background is relatively high.
The lighting in a few pics is a bit flat.
Your portfolio is heavy with gel work.  I know that's what you are asking about.   'Maybe cut some of the more flatly-lit "gel-looking" stuff.

This pic bothers me: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/190808/08/5d4c439ec17f7_m.jpg
It looks like you used a brush poorly, and it is poorly lit in the first place.
This one looks pretty good except the near eye is closed. https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/181121/08/5bf58c4777a67_m.jpg
This looks pretty good: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/190808/08/5d4c430cf1166_m.jpg

Aug 25 19 05:34 am Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3719

Walnut Creek, California, US

You may want to consider using gels to light just the background. Here's an example:

18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35548926

Aug 25 19 12:33 pm Link

Photographer

Tony Lawrence

Posts: 21526

Chicago, Illinois, US

Your work seems creative but some of your lighting isn't helping the models.   Several of who to be frank aren't ladies I'd show.   Quite often fair or not photographers are judged by the models they feature.  Going forward I'd look at tools in CS like Liquefy.   Some paid software like PhotoScape the non free version have a great tool kit with a Liquefy tool which is easy to use.   Also watch where you crop images.  Cutting off at joints can look odd.

Aug 25 19 08:40 pm Link

Photographer

Voy

Posts: 1594

Phoenix, Arizona, US

I think the exposure on some images are over or under exposed. Are you using a hand held light meter?

Aug 30 19 11:36 pm Link

Photographer

Fist Full of Ish

Posts: 2301

Aiken, South Carolina, US

Voy wrote:
I think the exposure on some images are over or under exposed. Are you using a hand held light meter?

I'm just going to say that it looks like he did reasonable things,  Perhaps you can point out a particular thing that you think is not so good.  Light meters save time, but they aren't essential.

Aug 31 19 01:15 pm Link

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CliveStJohn

Posts: 50

Dublin, Dublin, Ireland

I'm not really a lover of gels but you certainly did well with them and, it has to be said, some of your models are truly stunning! The choice of models in my region is quite restrictive.

As a suggestion, I would cut down the number of images to your very best and relook at the cropping on most as they seem far too tightly cut - area perspective is just as important.

Sep 01 19 01:28 am Link

Photographer

Voy

Posts: 1594

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Fist Full of Ish wrote:

I'm just going to say that it looks like he did reasonable things,  Perhaps you can point out a particular thing that you think is not so good.  Light meters save time, but they aren't essential.

My reasoning is that there is no consistency in exposure. Some are very saturated and others are washed out. So, I just want to find out if the inconsistency is during the capture or in the editing.

After watching a video of Dean Collins on using gels, I realized how easy it is to get the saturation that you want on the gels and be consistent by simply using my hand held spot meter. Especially when using strobes.

Sep 04 19 11:46 pm Link

Photographer

YourzTruly Photo

Posts: 5

Dallas, Texas, US

Thanks for the feedback. So the way I learned gel lighting, is that the only way to control light in an image is to physically move the light. Which in turn leads to how I have to crop my images. Turning up the power on the lights causes the colors to change (red to pink, blue to cyan, etc). Also the further I move my lighting back, You often lose specularity in the highlights.


Voy wrote:

My reasoning is that there is no consistency in exposure. Some are very saturated and others are washed out. So, I just want to find out if the inconsistency is during the capture or in the editing.

After watching a video of Dean Collins on using gels, I realized how easy it is to get the saturation that you want on the gels and be consistent by simply using my hand held spot meter. Especially when using strobes.

Sep 06 19 05:27 am Link