Garry k wrote:
Wishing You a Fast and Full Recovery

No need to critique my work though as you have done that in the past for me

and I am grateful

Thank you, Garry

FIFTYONE PHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
I own it, including styling and curious as to Your thoughts.

Hi FIFTYONE,

Not crazy about it. The light is flat (back-lights help), and the model look tired (Look under her eyes.) Her expression is non-existent, and not flattering either. Mouth is stiff, pose is stiff.
The tattoos are distracting. I personally do what I can to avoid them, or erase them. It's having someone else's work in yours.

Styling is very meh. The pearl necklace is too small and it looks like cheap plastic. Bigger things read better in pictures. The combination of hat, jacket, stockings, and umbrella, just doesn't work (especially the umbrella). A splash of color would have been nice somewhere (perhaps some pants too), especially against that white background, which I don't like either. It's on the verge of screaming.

Also, the watermark should not exist.

Sorry to be so critical, but this stuff just jumps at me.

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
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Sorry to be so critical, but this stuff just jumps at me.

Jorge, isn't this what Critique is all about?

Thanks and a speedy recovery to You.