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Model

Herefifi

Posts: 9

Charleston, West Virginia, US

Take a look and please give me ANY suggestions you may have.

Dec 17 22 10:16 am Link

Photographer

Shadow Dancer

Posts: 9616

Bellingham, Washington, US

You have some nice work posted. You have a couple of more or less snapshots as well, consider deleting those.

Your avatar image, the bright yellow top is distracting from YOU.
There are a couple with a bright red dress that also distracts.

You could take those bright colors down considerably in Photoshop or you could delete the images, your choice.

Overall, you are doing good work!

Dec 17 22 12:33 pm Link

Model

Herefifi

Posts: 9

Charleston, West Virginia, US

Thank you so much! That was very helpful! smile

Dec 18 22 11:39 am Link

Photographer

Shadow Dancer

Posts: 9616

Bellingham, Washington, US

WVGirl0105 wrote:
Thank you so much! That was very helpful! smile

You're very welcome, I'm glad my opinion was useful to you!
Keep up the good work!!

Dec 18 22 03:18 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11475

Olney, Maryland, US

18+
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/2 … 973968.jpg
WAY over exposed. It's so bright that I can't tell if it is actually 18+ or not.

Dec 20 22 05:06 pm Link

Photographer

Krpphoto

Posts: 194

Cape Coral, Florida, US

On too many of them you are just staring into the camera instead of working on face position or tilt. Concentration should also be done on eye placement .The limbs are also not positioned in any any sort of feminine way on many. Done well - the limbs will compliment the face  - as will the eyes. I might suggest a book called "Dynamic Posing Guide by Craig Stidham and Jeanne Harris. And no, I'm not selling something and when I  use the word "book" people love to massacre me with severe criticism about how, books , "in their opinion" do nothing as far as they are concerned --- but , to me , it is my photographers bible (well, one of them anyway) --- so I am suggesting it anyway. Not going to worry about the nay sayers and those who just love to criticize ! On "a  few more" of your images I would consider opening the mouth "just a little more" but only enough to show" just a "little bit"of the teeth. There are too many of them where the completely closed mouth gives a bored appearance to the image.

Feb 24 23 06:32 am Link

Photographer

Percolated Photo

Posts: 4

Austin, Texas, US

Consider updating your profile stats to reflect your actual appearance, because it's confusing to a person browsing the site. For example, your hair is listed as red, when it's clearly dark brown in your posted pictures. Also, the headless picture of you leaning against the spray painted wall is out of place.

Mar 14 23 06:36 am Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11475

Olney, Maryland, US

Your avatar is so somber. You can do better.
Not all of your recent uploads should be flagged "M".

Mar 14 23 04:52 pm Link

Photographer

Express Unlimited

Posts: 39

San Diego, California, US

posted to images .. this is my fave https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47722235

great stuff

;-)

yes I agree work on expressions
and try to create more feminine poses

Mar 20 23 12:34 pm Link