TarahDawson wrote:
yeah for critiques!

ok in this pic it has to much saturation. and you have a lot of contrast in others watch your lighting even the amount that comes into the eye piece ovre all i like the concepts but watch the lighting on faces.

TarahDawson wrote:
yeah for critiques!

SURE!

HayleyB wrote:
Im open....I have been shooting alot and cannot decide which pics to replace with new ones....Can you help me?

id say for sure the second bw you need to get in front of a mirror and make faces all your expressions are nearly the same! change them up and you will be ok! if you have all ndw work dont be scared to make a total change. because change is good!

Detroit MI wrote:

ok in this pic it has to much saturation. and you have a lot of contrast in others watch your lighting even the amount that comes into the eye piece ovre all i like the concepts but watch the lighting on faces.

ha! no such thing for this shot! but I need a lot more contrast in my shots for them to be what I want. Thanks for your input but it's just not what I'm going for.

Simplesoul26 wrote:
sure why not

ALL!    over exposed. when shooting in the light if the light is to your subjects back you must use a fill flash! no way around it you must counter the effects of the sun!
now this is a great capture!
keep up the good work and please put in a friend request at my page.

Heavily Medicated Photo wrote:
I'd love some input

Great shot!

i love the fact of the low level lighting! becarful of that your losing the subjects to fuzz in your frams to counter that you can use an outside light sorce like a flashlight or something to get the lense to focus then when its locked turn the light off and snao the pic! this will allow you the right dof and the proper focus on the subject!
over all good job but work in that!

Danae Mendez wrote:
I sooo want the truth

first things first!  please goto my page and put in a friend request!


this is a great shot!
what i can see from your work! you need to work the poses just a little more! more twists and turns to show more curves! dont just stand there and let the camera man shoot ask questions like is this fine should i twist more dont be scared to try it or something different when you are uncomfertable in a pose most of the time its a great pose.  good job here lets just see more work from you!

Laura Ann Nudes wrote:
Yes please

i like this but!

this is a multi subject pic.  im one to use multi sbujects so lets talk here for a sec about what the subject is.  is it the bridge or the model? its a very noce bridge but i dont think was the main subject in this pic. so with that said you can still pull this off the way you want it to be by drawing in closer to the main subject then offsetting it by panning the camera's angle left or right. if you have a problem understanding this please contact me and ill explain farther.

nice port over all just get some with the girls clothed as well. you wouldnt want to get stuck on just shooting nudes as you will limit yourself to 1 type of shooting.